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"We are like butterflies who flutter for a day and think it is forever" - Carl Sagan

Butterflies fluttering in the air, A ballet of beauty, beyond compare, A silent marvel, humming a song in flight, Fluttering secrets, painted in the light. The innocent laughter of a baby, so sweet and light, A flutter of wonder in love's gentle light. Giggles from the baby, radiating charm around, An enchanting sight, love in every fluttering sound. Lovers' whispers flutter, waves entwine, Beachside moonlit dance, love's design, Nightingale sings their unifying tune, In the moon-kissed night, hearts commune The fluttering heartbeat, a rhythmic song, A melody of life, where dreams belong, In the cocoon of dreams, as they unfurl, Flutter, dear heart, like a butterfly, swirl.

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Date: 10/9/2023 2:29:00 PM
Jay, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your image and quote, Constance
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Date: 9/23/2023 4:41:00 AM
Jay, your lines are very well written and wistfully speak of such beautiful things fluttering all around us. I'm pretty sure you've penned a winning entry.
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Date: 9/22/2023 9:01:00 PM
From the fluttering butterfly to the flutter of a human heart, everything is so beautifully delineated. Lovely take on the subject. All the Best dear Jay!
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Date: 9/22/2023 11:48:00 AM
- A ballet of beauty it really is, Jay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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