Flutter-Byes

"Buff-a-flies!" My tiny granddaughter points 
   to the black and yellow wings settling around us.
"Butter-flies," I agree with caveat. 

She scowls and refuses to speak again 
  until after dinner time.
Did I learn my lesson? Mostly...

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Date: 4/12/2023 7:01:00 AM
this is soo cute. I can actually envision her saying that. What a blessing to have grands in your seasoned years. I wish had at least one of those but not in my fate unfortunately.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 4/12/2023 6:17:00 PM
Ah, Nancy, I have only one myself and that is sad enough. She's quite a good one though! Elizabeth
Date: 3/27/2023 8:27:00 PM
I wrote a poem some time ago on how the butterfly got its name. As it turns out (some some research) the "experts" don't know. Some experts think its name may have had something to do with witches! Check it out with Google. / Maurice
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Date: 3/27/2023 4:42:00 PM
this is adorable. She probably didn't like the idea of flies with butter on them!!
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Date: 3/14/2023 2:31:00 AM
Thanks so much, Shirley! Yes, the little ones say things so directly, it makes you smile. Elizabeth
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Date: 3/13/2023 9:15:00 PM
Lovely verse, Elizabeth. If all us Mums, Grandmothers and Great grandmothers wrote down these little gems that their young children have said, it would make a fun little book to read. Take care, Shirley
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Date: 3/12/2023 2:50:00 PM
My bad, Joe. I forgot the title. We got a good laugh, nevertheless! She again distained our version. Ostriches she could understand! Thanks for the call in. Elizabeth
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Date: 3/12/2023 12:21:00 PM
What happened to Advance Australia fair Elizabeth.? Just a little 'sticky-beaking' No! don't run tgat by your grandaughter.' Howsumever those moments flutter-bye Too fast.' Slices of gold the truth be told Enjoy them while they last.'
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Date: 2/23/2023 7:33:00 PM
As long as you let her eat her 'buzghetti' with 'mato sauce,' everything will work out! lol.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 3/5/2023 9:33:00 PM
The Aussie National Anthem is "Australians, let us rejoice." So, having learned, I did not correct her version:"Australians, and ostriches...!" Elizabeth
Date: 2/23/2023 10:31:00 AM
You've written a beautiful poem, Elizabeth. Verbally berating my kids is a memory I will never forget. Things worked out OK, though. Blessings
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 3/5/2023 9:34:00 PM
Thanks so much! So kind! Elizabeth
Date: 2/23/2023 5:56:00 AM
Made me laugh, Elizabeth. I can vividly remember correcting my children. It was all good, though. Have a blessed day.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 3/5/2023 9:35:00 PM
Sorry for so late a reply.. slow days! Nice to share these memories! Elizabeth
Date: 2/22/2023 11:02:00 PM
Children must learn. Maybe another time to show her the way.
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 2/23/2023 1:15:00 AM
Yes, Victor. As I said one time in an earlier poem, "N'er g'ie name to your pleasure." A very nice man taught me that. Elizabeth
Date: 2/22/2023 11:00:00 PM
Oh dear, they don't like to be told lol. Tom
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Date: 2/23/2023 1:17:00 AM
No! She stood up for herself right from the beginning! Happily, she has continued to do so, now 22! Elizabeth
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