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Fluorescent Wasteland

salt flats
stretch for miles
in grocery stores
chip isle, frozen foods
seven and thirteen, respectively
reflect their shine
of white light
enticement

all organisms dried up,
fifteen per cent more, but lacking
in this pre-packaged
wasteland
where nothing ever grows
or dares to walk without
a list to double check.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/14/2012 9:21:00 PM
EMILY, congrats with your featured poem of the week.. Good night~PD
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:49:00 PM
this is a very enticing poem with deep emotional impact . You feel the earths pain while dreading the inceptual herding of society to conform to status quo. The glory in this poem is the atmosphere of desolation among that which claims to comfort.
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