Fluorescence

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FLUORESCENCE Fireworks flashed to illumine New Years’ Eve Firecrackers burst, dazzled on ebon sky. Splendid pyrotechnics, hard to believe. Glistened glittered, blazing fireballs up high. Firecrackers burst, dazzled on ebon sky Cluster of fluorescent flowers to bloom Glistened glittered, blazing fireballs up high. Simple shiny show on warm glow to zoom. Cluster of fluorescent flowers to bloom Splendid pyrotechnics, hard to believe. Simple shiny show on warm glow to zoom. Fireworks flashed to illumine New Years’ Eve. 01/08/21 A Strand (1044) Contest. by Brian Strand

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Vernon Witmer

Date: 1/8/2021 2:50:00 AM

some kind of pattern here that I am too uneducated to understand but I admire your comprehension of forms and also a very cool graphic that I wish I knew how to do. Mikey.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/8/2021 1:54:00 AM

Colourful fireworks very well glitter in this lovely Pantoum Maam. I specially liked the second stanza.. 'Cluster of fluorescent flowers to bloom, glistened, glittered... blazing fireballs up high'. I could see some light alliteration too.. 'simple shiny show on warm glow... '. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs ~ Ani