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Fluid Lines

From distractions to illusions Purity to vanity Curiosity to jealousy Apathy to bitterness Anger to loathing Beauty to ugliness Lines that can’t be re-crossed Transformations requiring exorcism AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted in March, 2018

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Date: 3/22/2018 9:33:00 PM
Fluid --- and so perilous. You have penned the proverbial 'slippery slope' in such an imaginative, ingenious---yes, evoluationary!--way. Bravo! :)gw
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Date: 3/22/2018 9:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

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