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soft marshmallow clouds topped with peaks of whipping cream I dream of sunshine 11th January 2016

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Date: 1/15/2016 6:24:00 PM
a very delectable haiku - I would love some sunshine, but will settle for hot chocolate with marshmallows or whipped cream - yummy!!
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Date: 1/15/2016 6:24:00 PM
Thanks Alesia:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/14/2016 9:49:00 PM
I want the whipped cream, can't read the word and not want it. Your poem is lovely and I heard a sigh between 2nd and 3rd line, as though I were saying it myself. lovely ... CayCay
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Date: 1/15/2016 3:46:00 AM
aww thanks CayCay your comment has brought a massive smile to my face:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/13/2016 2:48:00 PM
soothing write making my tummy hungry :) a 7
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Date: 1/13/2016 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/13/2016 2:26:00 PM
A lovely, soft and soothing Haiku, Jan. T.J
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Date: 1/13/2016 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much TJ:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/13/2016 11:52:00 AM
Soothes the eyes with this ecstatic beauty. Very nice poem my lovely friend. 7 sure. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/13/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/13/2016 5:47:00 AM
Yummy! Marvelous Haiku where imagination shines! A seven, dear Jan! Hugs xx
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Date: 1/13/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/13/2016 1:09:00 AM
Great Haiku Jan, Made me hungry with those lovely marshmallow clouds Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 1/13/2016 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Kevin - they do look very tasty sometimes:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/12/2016 8:26:00 PM
A beautiful Haiku Jan, Lights up our cloudy days. This Haiku joins my others, A Seven and a fave. Hugs....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/13/2016 3:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Mike I am so so so glad you are back:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/12/2016 3:51:00 PM
you make me want to taste....that which a poet will chase....even long after the pen is out of ink....to the place where the mind can no farther sink....where the open heart surpasses its limits....that's the rawest inspiration, never is it timid....as always you muse us greatly bw....;)
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:53:00 PM
Thanks as ever for your lovely comment Eric:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/12/2016 11:07:00 AM
You are like sunshine my dear , beautiful words really , loved it, hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/12/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Dalia I saw the sun today for 30 seconds and 10 minutes later i got caught in a hails storm!:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/12/2016 4:11:00 AM
Lovely and luscious imagery jan... 7 and huggs
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Date: 1/12/2016 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Kim:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/12/2016 2:36:00 AM
well, hello there gorgeous jan... enticed ny this 'ku!... for broken wings?.. huggs
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Date: 1/12/2016 7:56:00 AM
Not for a contest Nette I wrote it on the spur of the moment in my lunch break at work yesterday:-) hope you are having days filled with golden sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 10:26:00 PM
I'm sending you some sunshine from Florida....'sweet' haiku.:), jill
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:17:00 AM
oh thanks Jill I expect it to fly this way today lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 9:30:00 PM
yummmy!!! One of the best haiku I have ever read, hands down...EXCELLENT lady Jan!!! -luloo *smiles* *hugs*
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:17:00 AM
Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 8:59:00 PM
Beautiful! You had me at Whipped cream!
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:16:00 AM
Thanks Arthur I love whipped cream too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 6:31:00 PM
Amazingly sweet. Jan, if I recall correctly; you were first to welcome me to Poetry Soup. You are an inspiration to countless folks.
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:15:00 AM
Oh that is a sweet thing to say Iris. I have had so much encouragement since I began writing just two years ago I try to repay that by commenting back:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 5:25:00 PM
Now THAT is a great last line!!! howdy, Jan, where have you been hiding today?
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Date: 1/11/2016 5:27:00 PM
I've been at work which is where I wrote this poem at lunchtime lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 5:00:00 PM
Crazy this world..here we are dreaming of rain..have had some but not nearly enough, Your poem is delightful. BG
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Date: 1/11/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thanks Barbara we have had storms and flooding - we had one of the wettest December's in years:-( I long for some sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 4:30:00 PM
Is it still raining there more than the sun is shining? Come to Texas and we'll give you sun, my friend. Nice haiku. Hugs, Janet.x
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Date: 1/11/2016 4:39:00 PM
I've not seen the sun in weeks Janet - grey, dull, wet ,cloudy stormy you name it but blue skies are not on the horizon at the moment:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 4:29:00 PM
beautiful write Jan
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Date: 1/11/2016 4:38:00 PM
Thanks White Sage now if I could have some sunshine THAT would be wonderful:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 3:46:00 PM
Jan, this is lovely and soothing, loving it 7
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Date: 1/11/2016 3:48:00 PM
Thanks Broken Wings :-) we have grey clouds and rain possible snow/sleet this week I just long for blue skies and sunshine:-) hugs jan xx