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Fluffy Clouds


soft marshmallow clouds
topped with peaks of whipping cream
I dream of sunshine

11th January 2016

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Sara Kendrick

April 25, 2021 at 5:57 AM

Good one. Very descriptive winner. If clouds were marshmallows we would be trying to live on the clouds. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Kim Merryman

April 24, 2021 at 4:14 PM

A yummy haiku, Jan! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Connie Marcum Wong

April 24, 2021 at 11:44 AM

Congratulations on your win Jan. Spring has me inspired. Hugs Connie

Alesia Leach

January 15, 2016 at 6:24 PM

a very delectable haiku - I would love some sunshine, but will settle for hot chocolate with marshmallows or whipped cream - yummy!!

Jan Allison

January 15, 2016 at 6:24 PM

Thanks Alesia:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin

January 14, 2016 at 9:49 PM

I want the whipped cream, can't read the word and not want it. Your poem is lovely and I heard a sigh between 2nd and 3rd line, as though I were saying it myself. lovely ... CayCay

Jan Allison

January 15, 2016 at 3:46 AM

aww thanks CayCay your comment has brought a massive smile to my face:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

January 13, 2016 at 2:48 PM

soothing write making my tummy hungry :) a 7

Jan Allison

January 13, 2016 at 3:38 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

January 13, 2016 at 11:52 AM

Soothes the eyes with this ecstatic beauty. Very nice poem my lovely friend. 7 sure. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

January 13, 2016 at 3:39 PM

Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 13, 2016 at 5:47 AM

Yummy! Marvelous Haiku where imagination shines! A seven, dear Jan! Hugs xx

Jan Allison

January 13, 2016 at 3:40 PM

Thanks so much Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Kevin Leake

January 13, 2016 at 1:09 AM

Great Haiku Jan, Made me hungry with those lovely marshmallow clouds Best Wishes Kevin

Jan Allison

January 13, 2016 at 3:38 PM

Thanks so much Kevin - they do look very tasty sometimes:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

January 12, 2016 at 8:26 PM

A beautiful Haiku Jan, Lights up our cloudy days. This Haiku joins my others, A Seven and a fave. Hugs....Vladislav.

Jan Allison

January 13, 2016 at 3:37 PM

Thanks so much Mike I am so so so glad you are back:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

January 12, 2016 at 3:51 PM

you make me want to taste....that which a poet will chase....even long after the pen is out of ink....to the place where the mind can no farther sink....where the open heart surpasses its limits....that's the rawest inspiration, never is it timid....as always you muse us greatly bw....;)

Jan Allison

January 12, 2016 at 3:53 PM

Thanks as ever for your lovely comment Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein

January 12, 2016 at 11:07 AM

You are like sunshine my dear , beautiful words really , loved it, hugs / / :) dalia

Jan Allison

January 12, 2016 at 12:58 PM

Thanks Dalia I saw the sun today for 30 seconds and 10 minutes later i got caught in a hails storm!:-( hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

January 12, 2016 at 4:11 AM

Lovely and luscious imagery jan... 7 and huggs

Jan Allison

January 12, 2016 at 7:56 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

January 12, 2016 at 2:36 AM

well, hello there gorgeous jan... enticed ny this 'ku!... for broken wings?.. huggs

Jan Allison

January 12, 2016 at 7:56 AM

Not for a contest Nette I wrote it on the spur of the moment in my lunch break at work yesterday:-) hope you are having days filled with golden sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola

January 11, 2016 at 10:26 PM

I'm sending you some sunshine from Florida....'sweet' haiku.:), jill

Jan Allison

January 12, 2016 at 1:17 AM

oh thanks Jill I expect it to fly this way today lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars

January 11, 2016 at 9:30 PM

yummmy!!! One of the best haiku I have ever read, hands down...EXCELLENT lady Jan!!! -luloo *smiles* *hugs*

Jan Allison

January 12, 2016 at 1:17 AM

Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

January 11, 2016 at 8:59 PM

Beautiful! You had me at Whipped cream!

Jan Allison

January 12, 2016 at 1:16 AM

Thanks Arthur I love whipped cream too:-) hugs Jan xx

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

January 11, 2016 at 6:31 PM

Amazingly sweet. Jan, if I recall correctly; you were first to welcome me to Poetry Soup. You are an inspiration to countless folks.

Jan Allison

January 12, 2016 at 1:15 AM

Oh that is a sweet thing to say Iris. I have had so much encouragement since I began writing just two years ago I try to repay that by commenting back:-) hugs Jan xx