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Fluffy Clouds


soft marshmallow clouds
topped with peaks of whipping cream
I dream of sunshine

11th January 2016

skyweatherhaiku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2021 5:57:00 AM

Good one. Very descriptive winner. If clouds were marshmallows we would be trying to live on the clouds. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/24/2021 4:14:00 PM

A yummy haiku, Jan! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2021 11:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jan. Spring has me inspired. Hugs Connie

Alesia Leach

Date: 1/15/2016 6:24:00 PM

a very delectable haiku - I would love some sunshine, but will settle for hot chocolate with marshmallows or whipped cream - yummy!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2016 6:24:00 PM

Thanks Alesia:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/14/2016 9:49:00 PM

I want the whipped cream, can't read the word and not want it. Your poem is lovely and I heard a sigh between 2nd and 3rd line, as though I were saying it myself. lovely ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2016 3:46:00 AM

aww thanks CayCay your comment has brought a massive smile to my face:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/13/2016 2:48:00 PM

soothing write making my tummy hungry :) a 7

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2016 3:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/13/2016 11:52:00 AM

Soothes the eyes with this ecstatic beauty. Very nice poem my lovely friend. 7 sure. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2016 3:39:00 PM

Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/13/2016 5:47:00 AM

Yummy! Marvelous Haiku where imagination shines! A seven, dear Jan! Hugs xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2016 3:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Kevin Leake

Date: 1/13/2016 1:09:00 AM

Great Haiku Jan, Made me hungry with those lovely marshmallow clouds Best Wishes Kevin

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2016 3:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Kevin - they do look very tasty sometimes:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/12/2016 8:26:00 PM

A beautiful Haiku Jan, Lights up our cloudy days. This Haiku joins my others, A Seven and a fave. Hugs....Vladislav.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2016 3:37:00 PM

Thanks so much Mike I am so so so glad you are back:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/12/2016 3:51:00 PM

you make me want to taste....that which a poet will chase....even long after the pen is out of ink....to the place where the mind can no farther sink....where the open heart surpasses its limits....that's the rawest inspiration, never is it timid....as always you muse us greatly bw....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 3:53:00 PM

Thanks as ever for your lovely comment Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/12/2016 11:07:00 AM

You are like sunshine my dear , beautiful words really , loved it, hugs / / :) dalia

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 12:58:00 PM

Thanks Dalia I saw the sun today for 30 seconds and 10 minutes later i got caught in a hails storm!:-( hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/12/2016 4:11:00 AM

Lovely and luscious imagery jan... 7 and huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 7:56:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/12/2016 2:36:00 AM

well, hello there gorgeous jan... enticed ny this 'ku!... for broken wings?.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 7:56:00 AM

Not for a contest Nette I wrote it on the spur of the moment in my lunch break at work yesterday:-) hope you are having days filled with golden sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola

Date: 1/11/2016 10:26:00 PM

I'm sending you some sunshine from Florida....'sweet' haiku.:), jill

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 1:17:00 AM

oh thanks Jill I expect it to fly this way today lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars

Date: 1/11/2016 9:30:00 PM

yummmy!!! One of the best haiku I have ever read, hands down...EXCELLENT lady Jan!!! -luloo *smiles* *hugs*

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 1:17:00 AM

Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/11/2016 8:59:00 PM

Beautiful! You had me at Whipped cream!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 1:16:00 AM

Thanks Arthur I love whipped cream too:-) hugs Jan xx

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 1/11/2016 6:31:00 PM

Amazingly sweet. Jan, if I recall correctly; you were first to welcome me to Poetry Soup. You are an inspiration to countless folks.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 1:15:00 AM

Oh that is a sweet thing to say Iris. I have had so much encouragement since I began writing just two years ago I try to repay that by commenting back:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2016 5:25:00 PM

Now THAT is a great last line!!! howdy, Jan, where have you been hiding today?

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2016 5:27:00 PM

I've been at work which is where I wrote this poem at lunchtime lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/11/2016 5:00:00 PM

Crazy this world..here we are dreaming of rain..have had some but not nearly enough, Your poem is delightful. BG

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2016 5:06:00 PM

Thanks Barbara we have had storms and flooding - we had one of the wettest December's in years:-( I long for some sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 1/11/2016 4:30:00 PM

Is it still raining there more than the sun is shining? Come to Texas and we'll give you sun, my friend. Nice haiku. Hugs, Janet.x

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2016 4:39:00 PM

I've not seen the sun in weeks Janet - grey, dull, wet ,cloudy stormy you name it but blue skies are not on the horizon at the moment:-( hugs Jan xx

White Sage

Date: 1/11/2016 4:29:00 PM

beautiful write Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2016 4:38:00 PM

Thanks White Sage now if I could have some sunshine THAT would be wonderful:-) hugs jan xx