Fluent Rhyme

"Fluent Rhyme"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

Do you stew shrews to brew few true new clues

12/3/15
one liner contest
by silent one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 8:16 AM
A splendid one-liner! excellent '...ew' rhyming... so well crafted. Best wishes, Keith
Y. Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Eric, congrats on your win:-) Alexis
Merryman Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 10:38 PM
That's a tongue twister! Congrats on your win, Eric! Love, Kim
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Very clever Eric! YOU certainly have the long 'u' wrapped up! Vest wishes, Keith
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 6:58 PM
congrats on the winners' list, Eric.
Negron Flores Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 6:20 PM
Congratulations Eric.
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Eric.. Lovely win.... Love Skat
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:50 PM
thank you skat....so glad you liked it....;)
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Congrats on your win Eric:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:54 PM
quite a challenge to write it all in rhyme - that's my preference when I write but not everything at once just end rhyme usually lol:-) hugs Kan xx
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:50 PM
thanks jan....I try....lol
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations on your win, Eric, great rhyme one poem!
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 11:22 AM
thank you eve....I have tried that a few times before....what I want to construct is like a 16 line poem where every word rhymes....and trust me, I will get it done....one day....lol
Nance Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Great rhymes in one line! :)
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 11:20 AM
thank you casarah....I Love rhymes....;)
Muideen Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 5:20 PM
Beautiful and cute write. Brilliant.........A.M.
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 11:19 AM
thank you am....I like to try difficult writes....
Y. Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Eric, I enjoyed your well written tongue twister. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Boddie Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 11:17 AM
thank you alexis....always trying to challenge myself and that was challenging....lol
Allison Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 6:58 PM
wow this is a tongue twister Eric - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Boddie Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 9:23 PM
thank you jan and I just gotta try something every now and then....lol....but I am glad you liked it and good luck to you as well my friend....;)
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