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Fluent Rhyme

"Fluent Rhyme"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

Do you stew shrews to brew few true new clues

12/3/15
one liner contest
by silent one

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/14/2015 8:16:00 AM

A splendid one-liner! excellent '...ew' rhyming... so well crafted. Best wishes, Keith

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/7/2015 9:23:00 AM

Eric, congrats on your win:-) Alexis

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/5/2015 10:38:00 PM

That's a tongue twister! Congrats on your win, Eric! Love, Kim

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/5/2015 7:58:00 PM

Very clever Eric! YOU certainly have the long 'u' wrapped up! Vest wishes, Keith

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2015 6:58:00 PM

congrats on the winners' list, Eric.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/5/2015 6:20:00 PM

Congratulations Eric.

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 12:48:00 PM

Eric.. Lovely win.... Love Skat

Eric Boddie
Date: 12/5/2015 12:50:00 PM

thank you skat....so glad you liked it....;)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2015 12:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 12:54:00 PM

quite a challenge to write it all in rhyme - that's my preference when I write but not everything at once just end rhyme usually lol:-) hugs Kan xx

Eric Boddie
Date: 12/5/2015 12:50:00 PM

thanks jan....I try....lol

Eve Roper

Date: 12/5/2015 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Eric, great rhyme one poem!

Eric Boddie
Date: 12/5/2015 11:22:00 AM

thank you eve....I have tried that a few times before....what I want to construct is like a 16 line poem where every word rhymes....and trust me, I will get it done....one day....lol