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Fluent Rhyme

"Fluent Rhyme"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

Do you stew shrews to brew few true new clues

12/3/15
one liner contest
by silent one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/14/2015 8:16:00 AM
A splendid one-liner! excellent '...ew' rhyming... so well crafted. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/7/2015 9:23:00 AM
Eric, congrats on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:38:00 PM
That's a tongue twister! Congrats on your win, Eric! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/5/2015 7:58:00 PM
Very clever Eric! YOU certainly have the long 'u' wrapped up! Vest wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/5/2015 6:58:00 PM
congrats on the winners' list, Eric.
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Date: 12/5/2015 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations Eric.
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Date: 12/5/2015 12:48:00 PM
Eric.. Lovely win.... Love Skat
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eric boddie
Date: 12/5/2015 12:50:00 PM
thank you skat....so glad you liked it....;)
Date: 12/5/2015 12:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eric:-) hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/5/2015 12:54:00 PM
quite a challenge to write it all in rhyme - that's my preference when I write but not everything at once just end rhyme usually lol:-) hugs Kan xx
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eric boddie
Date: 12/5/2015 12:50:00 PM
thanks jan....I try....lol
Date: 12/5/2015 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Eric, great rhyme one poem!
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eric boddie
Date: 12/5/2015 11:22:00 AM
thank you eve....I have tried that a few times before....what I want to construct is like a 16 line poem where every word rhymes....and trust me, I will get it done....one day....lol
Date: 12/5/2015 7:55:00 AM
Great rhymes in one line! :)
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eric boddie
Date: 12/5/2015 11:20:00 AM
thank you casarah....I Love rhymes....;)
Date: 12/4/2015 5:20:00 PM
Beautiful and cute write. Brilliant.........A.M.
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eric boddie
Date: 12/5/2015 11:19:00 AM
thank you am....I like to try difficult writes....
Date: 12/4/2015 8:35:00 AM
Eric, I enjoyed your well written tongue twister. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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eric boddie
Date: 12/5/2015 11:17:00 AM
thank you alexis....always trying to challenge myself and that was challenging....lol
Date: 12/3/2015 6:58:00 PM
wow this is a tongue twister Eric - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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eric boddie
Date: 12/3/2015 9:23:00 PM
thank you jan and I just gotta try something every now and then....lol....but I am glad you liked it and good luck to you as well my friend....;)