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Flowing Script

my love bled 
across the page
as a fountain pen's ink
bleeds into the fibers 
of linen paper
my heart spilling
it's love for you
in crimson flowing script

loveloveverse

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Adeleke Adeite

January 8, 2010 at 9:29 AM

Congrats on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 5, 2010 at 7:29 AM

Congratulations J.B. You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem, "flowing script". It is a beautiful concise love poem. Very nice writing. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 22, 2009 at 10:17 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals J.B. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Elaine George

December 21, 2009 at 9:32 PM

Beautiful verse! Best wishes on going through to the finals. Love, Lainie

P Sheart

December 21, 2009 at 8:16 AM

BJ, Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty