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Flowing Script

my love bled across the page as a fountain pen's ink bleeds into the fibers of linen paper my heart spilling it's love for you in crimson flowing script

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 1/8/2010 9:29:00 AM

Congrats on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/5/2010 7:29:00 AM

Congratulations J.B. You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem, "flowing script". It is a beautiful concise love poem. Very nice writing. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2009 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals J.B. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 12/21/2009 9:32:00 PM

Beautiful verse! Best wishes on going through to the finals. Love, Lainie

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 8:16:00 AM

BJ, Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty