Flowers For Mama

“In lieu of flowers, make donation
To your favorite charity”.
This was written very plainly
In death notice for our mother.

We knew that she dearly loved them
And her passion was her garden.
She shared flowers with her loved ones,
With her neighbors and her friends.

I was glad to see the chapel filled
With bright blossoms in profusion.
It was if spring had come early
On this day in January.

Mama, will you please forgive us
That we didn’t mind your wishes?
We remember you surrounded by
The beauty of your garden.

We couldn’t bear to bury you
Without your beloved flowers.
“For the poor is always with us”,
But our mama's gone away.



By:Joyce Johnson  1/26/2011  6th place


For Francine Roberts' contest "Flowers"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Flowers". Love, Carol
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February 6, 2011 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great write. Reading this reminded me of my recently departed cousin.
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February 5, 2011 at 12:26 PM
Hi Joyce - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Francine's "Flower" contest. Best wishes, KC
Tongco Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 2:58 AM
Congratulations for such an emotional poem ^_^
Richards Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 8:08 AM
This was such a tender story....so well done, and well deserving a win, Joyce. Just beautiful this is ! love, Carrie
Onclaud Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 7:26 AM
best cheers for winning this contest with such fine write, joyce! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 5:55 AM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful win in the Flowers contest with this impressive write and exciting entry my friend.. truly touches the heart ... enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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February 1, 2011 at 3:07 AM
congratulations on your poignant winning poem
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Joyce, someone else wrote on this theme as well, Both of you did an awesome job with the topic. Wonderful poem! And a big 7 with my congrats. Luv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 8:01 PM
Many congratulations for this win Joyce.
Mehta Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Joyce
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January 31, 2011 at 6:25 PM
So many times people ask that donations be made in lieu of flowers, Joyce, but the flowers do help the grieving family. It lets them know how much their departed loved one was cherished. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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January 31, 2011 at 6:12 PM
this was lovely Joyce, just lovely congrats on your 6th place win in my contest
Taylor Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Awesome entry, Joyce. Beautiful tribute. Tender and warm. Impressive. Have a great weekend and you and yours be well. Thanks for your kind words. Good luck. xxxRalph
Gibbs Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 11:53 PM
hey joyce...this brought a tears in ma eyes...what a beautiful way of expression...brilliant...
Sweetheart Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 5:00 PM
One lovely write Joyce .. a different aspect on flowers but one that tugs at every heart my friend.. good luck in the new contest..with this breathtaking piece ..with luv..
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January 26, 2011 at 4:40 PM
oh, this is so wonderful, Joyce. to include your mother in this poem for flowers. Lovely idea! You are lucky to have your cat. I miss Callie so much. My two are not bad but I really miss the affectionate one. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 3:46 PM
Very touchy and moving write for the contest on floiwers, Joyce
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