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Flowers as far as the eye can see

Meadow of clustered flowers
fragrant bouquets of petals
pinks purples yellows whites
~ a delightful extravaganza

Spreading their joy like tentacles 
they entice butterflies and bees
while the sun keeps busy 
caressing this wild ageless garden


AP: Honorable Mention 2025, Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fleming Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 11:56 AM
Nicely done, Line...nicely done. :) john
Gauthier Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 7:11 PM
Much appreciated, thanks John ~
Rodgers Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Dear Line, I love the way you described the garden’s joyful dance with the butterflies and bees, so full of life and timeless beauty. It’s like a little pocket of magic in the everyday it brought a calm, sunny smile to my day. Blessings, My Dear Line, Daniel
Gauthier Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 7:11 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Daniel. Have a fabulous day ~
Baker Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 6:15 PM
You paint a beautiful picture with your poetic words, Line. Thank you. Bill p.s. we saw the most beautiful field the other day while driving through the countryside ... thousands of planted and grown tall sunflowers ... the yellow was entrancing. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 7:16 PM
Awesome ~ I hope you took a photo... although sometimes the impression engraved in our mind is enough. I remember seeing a few bison (instead of cattle) on the side of the highway... they're usually brown but these were a beautiful soft shade of creamy beige ~ it was magical. No photo but the memory is still in my head.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:01 PM
Just last week, we encountered field after field of sunflowers....they'd been planted in neat rows as far as the eye could see. It was quite spectacular!
Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:17 PM
I bet ~ I hope you took photos
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