Flowers and Arrows

Multicolored hands dissolved the pain, that rose within me
You were there; certain you'd win your part in the ring
Condescension became sparks I used as light to see
I held to my song you sought to silence, by your sting

Once again, your buzz faded and you fell flat
Hold firm the religious reins of your horse, I say
I offered flowers; you strutted, and then turn back
I gave you your day, with garland and songs unforced

Self-made pedestal holds no sap like earth's wood
You may think me soft as gel, nay! I am mahogany!
Papa was carver of antiques from those trees, you understood...
His hands were guided by the Source, the root of my recovery.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/13/2015 9:00:00 PM
I'll have to add this to my favorite list!
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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis
Date: 1/22/2015 11:14:00 AM
Dylan, You're encouraging me on my journey, and I thank you for taking time to read, plus comment. You, too, inspires the masses of us, my friend. namaste!
Date: 12/19/2014 2:28:00 PM
Oh, this is beautiful, Irisrose! No arrows aimed in the piece, but who could possibly resist a flower? Love this write,admire your Papa for his carvings, and sharing this "Source" with you! I'm sure that you are "mahogany". The little bee sounds cruel and demeaning...splat! Keep well and wishing you a beautiful Christmas! Mikki
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:51:00 AM
Belise of multicolored hands "dissolved the pain" to fill the people heart with hope and color of hope .Impressive.Best regards,O.B
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