Flower Time

In the Santa Monica Mountains
I was flying in a small helicopter
I think it was a Robinson22

the pilot buzzed surfers
with faces of fury

we touched down 
in the mountains
for a brief walk

when I saw a rare 
blooming cactus

I bent down 
to smell the flowers,
growing out its side

It took my lips 
and half a pint of
rot gut whiskey

I found it so beautiful 
that I went back
the next day to cut it down

I just couldn’t bring myself to do it

so I drowned a surfer instead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Winter Avatar
March 19, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Well, this ending totally freaks me out. Really creepy powerful. Certainly makes the reader wonder. Just wow. Love, Shar
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace