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Flower Song

My petal love
tonight we sing
our souls fill with joy
I poet
have flowers and song for you...

Wine and dinner awaits
a most alluring Spanish moon
has risen over the sea
it is burning
suspended in center of sky
shining on all of the earth...

So sweetly comes the night air
I have roses and carnations
divine for you
small violets with lure of passion
and poignant tone
sweet chocolates for you to choose...

After dinner we shall stroll
down to the seaside
where no one shall see us
and what we have come here to do...

Your voice of fallen air
in zone of wonder in ardent dusk
marches playfully through my ears
as the night falls around us...

It is your orchid my love
my shepherdess of milk white dreams
later tonight my beloved
I will make bouquets of water
kisses upon your breasts and thighs
all with the fragrance of these flowers
I will savor you with joy...

The creator has created you
so you can nourish me
A laying tide of inarticulate air
breaks in front of us
the sea in foam
A symphony beautiful some god has forgotten...

I need your fragrant love
like the flowers need the water
we will see and hear the darkness go
perhaps see the morning light play
come my beloved petal
we live the dream of love tonight...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/20/2013 6:51:00 PM
Ken Such a sensual and loving write. You created a story of seduction and devotion in a heartfelt and beautiful way. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Protected Heart poem. Hugs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 12/20/2013 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Robin. Ken
Date: 9/27/2013 12:06:00 AM
Beyond gorgeous. Sandy love
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/27/2013 12:10:00 AM
Hi Sandy, Thank you for stopping by.. Ken
Date: 9/4/2013 9:26:00 PM
Amazing imagery! A very sensual and beautiful poem, Ken!...You might like my poem titled, "The Shy Rose"...And, thank you for your nice comments. It is very much appreciated!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/4/2013 9:30:00 PM
Hi Kelly, Thanks for taking time to read this one. Ken
Date: 8/30/2013 8:49:00 PM
Quite dreamy and romantic/. Nicely written poem here Always, Laura
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Date: 8/30/2013 8:52:00 PM
Hi Laura, Thanks for the lovely comment.. Ken
Date: 8/30/2013 3:41:00 PM
very beautiful Ken enjoyed Shadow x smile
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/30/2013 4:50:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you my friend.. Ken
Date: 8/25/2013 6:10:00 AM
Enthralling.....exceptionally beautiful...To my favorites. Thanks for your visit and kind comment.
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Date: 8/25/2013 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Eileen for visiting and the wonderful comment.. Regards, Ken
Date: 8/24/2013 12:59:00 PM
good write Ken kudos Shadow x smile
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/24/2013 1:04:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you...Good to read from you...Hope all is well with you... regards, Ken
Date: 8/23/2013 10:09:00 PM
This is certainly a lovely romantic fairy tale. stunning sensual lines :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/23/2013 10:16:00 PM
Hi Karen, Thank you for visiting tonight and the kind comment...Much appreciated as always.. Ken...
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/23/2013 10:14:00 PM
Hola Linda, Gracias mi Paloma..So glad you liked it...I hope to compose more of your liking... Besos y abrazos, Ken...
Date: 8/23/2013 10:06:00 PM
Truly Stunning! very beautiful. Even the wins sounds magical. Really it does! I have to say now this is my favorite from you. The savoring sounds beyond great. I loved so many lines in this, and the write has an amazing feeling every women longs for when it comes to feeling beautiful. " This poem should be endless " perfect 10 poem. for giving the night air, a new aroma. sending you a tiny soup mail... A New Fav.... always a fan....LINDA
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Date: 8/23/2013 3:53:00 PM
Oh my gosh Kenneth....what a beautiful poem....you should enter this in one of the contests..if there is one going on it would fit in right now it would win!..awesome.....
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/23/2013 3:56:00 PM
Hi Donna, Thank you for visiting and the beautiful comment as well.. Ken..
Date: 8/23/2013 3:30:00 PM
- Kenneth, now I'll be deeply honest with my comments to you: This is the most beautiful poem I've read in a long, long time!! - Thank you! - Thank you for your visit and your comments on my little poem. - Wish you a delightful weekend .... keep up the romance ... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/23/2013 3:35:00 PM
Hi Anne, Thanks for drooping by and reading as well as the wonderful comment... Regards, Ken..

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