Flower Shower

A tiny bug landed on Dumbo's nose
Eyed him warily, then stuck in a rose
   Dumbo brushed it away
   The bug wanted to stay
Dumbo loaded bug spray into 'his hose'
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March 12, 2020 at 8:29 AM
Wow, that little bug doesn't stand a chance now.
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March 12, 2020 at 7:26 PM
You never know. That bug may be a BIG drinker! … Thanks, Chris! :) gw
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March 12, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Dumbo should be called Smartbo now
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March 12, 2020 at 7:16 PM
As you like it. ~ Will He Shake Spear
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March 12, 2020 at 1:34 AM
lol... Too funny.. Sweet and lovely Limerick Gershon..
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March 12, 2020 at 6:59 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Jenish. Smiles, Gershon
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March 11, 2020 at 10:30 PM
You are so good at limericks, Gershon, and this one is a prime example. It's very cleverly done and awfully cute and amusing! Blessings. :)
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March 12, 2020 at 6:58 PM
Thank you so much for the nice compliment, Evelyn. Hope I'll continue to be worthy of it. Cheers, Gershon...and Zoop de Boop! (Just loved that haiku).
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