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Flower Shower

A tiny bug landed on Dumbo's nose Eyed him warily, then stuck in a rose Dumbo brushed it away The bug wanted to stay Dumbo loaded bug spray into 'his hose'

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Chris Green

Date: 3/12/2020 8:29:00 AM

Wow, that little bug doesn't stand a chance now.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/12/2020 7:26:00 PM

You never know. That bug may be a BIG drinker! … Thanks, Chris! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/12/2020 6:10:00 AM

Dumbo should be called Smartbo now

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/12/2020 7:16:00 PM

As you like it. ~ Will He Shake Spear

Jenish Somadas

Date: 3/12/2020 1:34:00 AM

lol... Too funny.. Sweet and lovely Limerick Gershon..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/12/2020 6:59:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Jenish. Smiles, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/11/2020 10:30:00 PM

You are so good at limericks, Gershon, and this one is a prime example. It's very cleverly done and awfully cute and amusing! Blessings. :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/12/2020 6:58:00 PM

Thank you so much for the nice compliment, Evelyn. Hope I'll continue to be worthy of it. Cheers, Gershon...and Zoop de Boop! (Just loved that haiku).