Flower Power

FLOWER POWER


He broke the rule, shattered it,
left the pieces for all to see.

The hill rolling, tree climbing,
butterfly chasing, game of tag
was over and the race for the
water fountain was on.

He ran with his flock,
suddenly breaking sharply
to the left, slowing to a
two knee landing.

He bent low, rolled onto
his side, did a little snake
dance, then lay motionless.

After several minutes he rose,
corrected his circuitous cycle,
and rejoined the thirsty flock.

Intrigued, I investigated the
cause/effect relationship
of his deviation -  A lone dandelion.

It had drawn him in,
he had studied it, touched it,
smelled it, tasted it, spent a
few moments getting to know it.

He remained unfamiliar with the rule
but had gained a familiarity with
the dandelion.

Perhaps he was on to something.


Submitted to Encounters with Flowers – Poetry Contest
Sponsor – Anthony Slausen
11/22/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 10:32 PM
this is so cute, and I agree with rhonda. Very creative. Congrats are in order I see!
Lawless Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:47 PM
Thanks Andrea, your comments are always appreciated.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Now that's an encounter...very creative, John! Congrats on your wonderful second place win!!
Lawless Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Thank you Rhonda for you support.
Sirak Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 7:56 AM
This is fantastic!!! Dandelions are my favorite flower. I can never resist stopping to marvel at them, and occasionally pluck one to put in my hair.
Lawless Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Thanks Monterey. there is something awe inspiring about a field dotted with a thousand dandelions.
Guzzi Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 7:30 PM
Ah another tale of the dandy lion! Did you know the entire plant including the root & flower is edible? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Lawless Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:11 PM
Debbie, that's about the only thing he didn't do to the poor dandelion - eat it.
Yvonne Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Brilliant write. A fav for me! Congratulations on your superb win!
Lawless Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:10 PM
AH, Maurice, nice to hear from you. Thanks for your support and comments.
Stoner Jr Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 3:24 PM
congratulations on your much deserved win ,I liked this one first time I read it way to go
Lawless Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:08 PM
Thanks for stopping back Robert and thanks for you support.
Gibson Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 11:51 AM
I loved this the first time I Read it and it is even better the second time. Congratulations on a great win.
Lawless Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:08 PM
Thank you Faye, as always.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 11:48 AM
A fascinating poem John. Wonderful descriptions of the sheep as if you studied them to be able to describe their movements so well. I enjoyed reading this very much. Congratulations on your well deserved high win.
Lawless Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:07 PM
Thanks Brenda, the little sheep in the poem were my nieces an nephews, the inquisitive one a four year old nephew. One of many lessons I have been taught by the children.
Allison Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 11:20 AM
totally unique take on the theme - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:06 PM
Thanks Jan, I pulled this from the archives of "life at the park with the kids".
Onclaud Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 9:55 AM
deep, observant thought, john... we learn of flowers by spending time with them... superb job!.. huggs
Lawless Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Hey Nette, the inspiration was my then four year old nephew who did the investigation.
Stoner Jr Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:02 PM
enjoyed this insightful moment,well versed and a pleasure to read, thanks much.
Lawless Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:04 PM
Thanks Robert appreciate you comment.
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