Flower Haiku's

Greenish passers by Let them be They too, are the earth. .............................................. Blooming rose Blossoming fragrance Temporary survival. .............................................. Swaying cedar Bold standard Like a lord. .............................................. Singing grasses At harmattan Bush orchestra. ............................................. Buzzing bee Cherishing fragrance Like a lover. By:Charles melody (Lightning Ink) February 4th, 2011.

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Constance La France

Date: 2/16/2011 6:45:00 AM

I love flowers so I love these haikus, each one special, in answer to your comment on my poem, I am sorry for the problems in your country, Charles, I realize how lucky I am to live in a country that is at peace, God bless you always~~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/15/2011 2:12:00 PM

You did a wonderful job with this sequence of haiku, son. You made your "mum" proud. Love you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2011 11:57:00 PM

These are sweet blossoms of poetry, Charles. Very fun to read. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 2/10/2011 8:56:00 AM

Four for the price of one, Charles. Thanks for sharing. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2011 10:03:00 PM

these are very fun to read. the 4th one for me is the most haiku sounding and my very favorite of the bunch. LUv ,Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2011 3:34:00 PM

Interesting work that is very descriptive and creative...Enjoyed reading tonight..Thanks of stopping by and commenting on my work..Your review was uplifting..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/7/2011 1:10:00 PM

thankxx Charles .. a little passion on a dialy basis from the "Sweetheart"..its all good... and now I am writing bout my puppy today so take a look see luv..