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Flow Redone

There sat in my chair, a sighting when the earth quivered no delighting. Out the window I watched it flow; down the grade, heaps, icy snow. The mask of skiers not revealed; rescue workers rushed in to unseal. They scattered about with their tools in hand, dug for life that had a plan. In all that commotion I did see' deep the emotion when skiers were freed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/16/2009 4:59:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Carol. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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