Flow

I watched a glass goblet clean itself in patience of beauty The tingling ring in sparkle water was the evidence of the slow unfurl of a flower I imagined a symphony of open palms swaying spreading winged tips flowing blankets of kindness caressing golden light that never flames but shines The measure of humanity clearly defined

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/7/2018 11:10:00 PM

Cheers...

Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 9/7/2018 11:41:00 PM

Many thanks!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/7/2018 1:21:00 PM

Such lovely, appealing imagery, Gabrielle! Janice

Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 9/19/2018 3:55:00 PM

Thanks so much Janice!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 9/7/2018 1:47:00 AM

This poem has a very delicate and elegant "flow" to it. Lovely.

Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 9/19/2018 3:56:00 PM

Thank you Rhona!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 9/6/2018 7:37:00 PM

Brilliant lovely right... Write On =D James

Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 9/19/2018 3:54:00 PM

Hi James, many thanks to you!

Joseph May

Date: 9/6/2018 4:55:00 PM

A flower unfurls and thoughts take wing...Well written Gabrielle..

Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 9/19/2018 3:54:00 PM

Thanks Joseph!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/5/2018 8:17:00 PM

Every word was beautifully thought out and selected masterfully Gabrielle.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/5/2018 4:20:00 PM

I have enjoyed your ethereal poem, Nothing but beauty found in each strong line. Dear Gabrielle, I hope to read more of your poetry . Have a wonderful evening.

Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 9/5/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thank you Pixie! You have a beautiful evening as well!

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 9/3/2018 10:16:00 AM

Very nicely worded, with a sensuous element of mystery. Very good piece.

Lawrence Sharp
Date: 9/3/2018 11:53:00 PM

Don't worry about moving past it. The write words will come when they're ready, and you'll be pleased at how good they'll be.

Gabrielle Jordan
Date: 9/3/2018 1:45:00 PM

Hey Lawrence, nice to hear from you. In some what of a writing funk...not sure how to move past it. Thanks for seeing my thoughts!