Florida Spring

pine trees lash and sway
in spring’s gusty williwaw,	
briefly turbulent
sun rays burn reluctant mists
into multicolored bow	

March 2, 2022
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Kauffman Avatar
April 11, 2022 at 4:31 PM
What a delightful Tanka, Faye. The dynamic joy of spring moves through every line! Congratulations on your win! All the best!
Alex Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 9:23 PM
"sun rays burn reluctant mists" - Wow! Beautiful. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 8:55 PM
Gorgeous!
Rodd Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 7:00 PM
Beautiful poem, and so like Florida!
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 4:41 AM
I enjoyed reading your Tanka. Reads like a good contender for the contest. I am glad that I chose this one to read today. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
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