Florida and Wonderful News

Flew out to Florida with family
Our rented home had Jacuzzi and pool
Tropical sun with high humidity
Swimming and ice drinks to help keep us cool.

Disney parks were awesome and we had fun
From nine in the morning till late at night
With shows and fast rides to suit everyone
The firework shows were an amazing sight.

But things got better with news of great joy
China at Epcot we received a call
My youngest daughter had a baby boy
A Grandad again I felt ten feet tall.

Fantastic time we had with lots of fun
But nothing beats cradling a new grandson.

Written on 1st September 2018.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 4:42 AM
Florida is a beautiful state, very much like Kerala where I live. I have been to Florida four times. My sister lives in Florida. The last time we went to Florida was in 2018 to attend my sister's son's marriage. We too enjoyed Disney land and the festivity of marriage as you enjoyed your vacation in Florida and the news of the birth of your grandson.
Cunningham Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm long overdue to visit the USA again, travelling as much as I can whilst my health allows. India is on my bucket list too. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Mcguire Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 11:54 PM
You got that right grandpa! What a great day!
Cunningham Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 2:23 AM
Thanks Timothy, yes indeed it was. Tom
Thayer Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 7:09 AM
What A Great Way To Tell A Wonderful Story!...Loved Every Bit Of It...Congrats and Enjoy!
Cunningham Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you very much Vicki, it was fantastic to receive the news,I'm still feeling on top of the world. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 8:19 PM
Congratulations Grandpa, a terrific ending.
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Thank you very much Karen, it was amazing to see his picture on the phone a short time after he was born. Tom
Laurie Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Hello Tom … a charming and positive sonnet - nicely written - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 10:11 PM
Thank you very much Lindsay, I was on top of the world when I wrote it. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 4:21 PM
GREAT poem, Tom! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Thank you very much Janice, happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Messina Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations Tom! Blessings to your daughter and your new grandson. Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Thank you very much Charlie, it was great to receive the news when we were on holiday, couldn't wait to get home. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 1:23 AM
wow wow, double the fun. A poem of great joy!
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 3:18 AM
Thank you Andrea, had a great time and the wonderful news was the icing on the cake. Tom
Goff Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Sounds wonderful, Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 3:17 AM
Thank you very much James. Regards Tom
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Congrats! What wonderful news!
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Thank you Richard, it really made our day when we received the call. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 2:46 PM
what a splendid write with a bonus offer--another grandson-- enjoy your moment, tom..huggs
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Thank you very much Nette, it was a lovely surprise for us all. Tom
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Main course (vacation) topped off with the sweetest of desserts (grandson). Congrats, ~ gw
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Thank you Gershon, love your comment. Tom
Callus Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Glad you not only enjoyed your vacation Tom, but also became a grandfather for a second time! Congratulations!! // paul
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Thank you Paul, we had a wonderful time but were anxious to get home to see him too. Tom
Warrior Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Congrats!!! grandpa Tom...you received a jewel from heaven...lovely sonnet my friend...love & birth...^WW^
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Thank you very much WW, we are so grateful for our heavenly gift. Tom
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 2:16 AM
- Oh, enjoy this time Tom :) - Congratulations on this little prince :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 4:10 AM
Thank you very much Sunshine, he is a tiny little prince, held him on Saturday it felt so good. Tom
Michael Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Very good...free spirited write expressing the joys of life... the ultimate having a grandson in your arms... All the best Tom
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 1:02 AM
Thank you Arturo, it certainly brightened our day when we got the call. My daughter sent pics straight away but have since had the pleasure of holding him. Hope you're well. Tom
Sietesantos Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Congratulations on the birth of your new grandson! What an exciting and joyful event for you and your family! This is such a lovely sonnet in commemoration of this blessed occasion and of your enjoyable holiday in Florida! Best wishes to you and yours, Tom! Love, blessings, and much happiness always. Pandita
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Thank you Pandita, it was such a nice surprise to get the call, it certainly made our day, met him on Saturday for the first time. Hope you're well. Tom
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 5:56 PM
How wonderful! A time you will always remember and hold dear. Congratulations on your new addition to your family! I loved reading of your joy in this poetic piece Tom. Nothing brings more joy than a newborn baby! : )
Cunningham Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 12:56 AM
Thank you Connie, it was a lovely surprise and we couldn't wait to see him. So when he's older I'll take him to Florida. Tom
Pett Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Congratulations on becoming a grandad wonderful news and for writing this excellent sonnet Tom, I was in Florida in 1986 fantastic then though very humid, thanks for sharing my friend. :))
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Roy. We had a great time and made it better when we got the good news, humidity was high and your clothes feel soggy after a day at the parks. We were lucky to have a pool at the house to cool off. Tom
Sands Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations Tom. Very nice ! :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, it made our holiday better when we got the news. Tom
Gentile Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations Tom! What a wonderland holiday and a lovely write! Happy Sunday !!
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Thank you Mike, had a great time then we got the news whilst over there, it was great to meet him yesterday. Tom
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:55 AM
Wow! Rejoice in bliss and blessings Tom. I can feel the glee into your words.. the joy into your exquisite life moments.. An amazing cheering Sonnet! I'm happy for you Tom, congratulations! Enjoy "cradling your new grandson"! A great joy to read. Be blessed always.
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 4:11 AM
Thank you very much Besma, met him for the first time yesterday,we are all so happy and grateful. Tom
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:33 AM
After a wonderful holiday I'm sure you were so happy to get home to meet him Tom! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:38 AM
Thank you Jan, held him for the first time yesterday, so tiny. We wanted the holiday to speed up, great to be home to see him. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:15 AM
Marvelous news that a new life has just begun. May the Lord keep him healthy and help him grow to be as good a man as his grandfather. Thank you for sharing. Wonderful poem dear, Tom! It brought back memories of multiple trips I had in Florida when living in Canada. Happy you enjoyed your stay there!
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:41 AM
Thank you Demetrios, met him for the first time yesterday, a little miracle. It was great to be home to meet him. Tom
Watson Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 1:44 AM
Thank you for sharing your happiness in a wonderful poetic tribute to family time and the joys of new birth, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:34 AM
Thank you Wendy a great time we had but seeing him yesterday was truly magical. Tom
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