Florida and Wonderful News

Flew out to Florida with family
Our rented home had Jacuzzi and pool
Tropical sun with high humidity
Swimming and ice drinks to help keep us cool.

Disney parks were awesome and we had fun
From nine in the morning till late at night
With shows and fast rides to suit everyone
The firework shows were an amazing sight.

But things got better with news of great joy
China at Epcot we received a call
My youngest daughter had a baby boy
A Grandad again I felt ten feet tall.

Fantastic time we had with lots of fun
But nothing beats cradling a new grandson.

Written on 1st September 2018.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 10/17/2024 4:42:00 AM
Florida is a beautiful state, very much like Kerala where I live. I have been to Florida four times. My sister lives in Florida. The last time we went to Florida was in 2018 to attend my sister's son's marriage. We too enjoyed Disney land and the festivity of marriage as you enjoyed your vacation in Florida and the news of the birth of your grandson.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/17/2024 4:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm long overdue to visit the USA again, travelling as much as I can whilst my health allows. India is on my bucket list too. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 9/6/2018 11:54:00 PM
You got that right grandpa! What a great day!
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Date: 9/7/2018 2:23:00 AM
Thanks Timothy, yes indeed it was. Tom
Date: 9/6/2018 7:09:00 AM
What A Great Way To Tell A Wonderful Story!...Loved Every Bit Of It...Congrats and Enjoy!
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Date: 9/6/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you very much Vicki, it was fantastic to receive the news,I'm still feeling on top of the world. Tom
Date: 9/5/2018 8:19:00 PM
Congratulations Grandpa, a terrific ending.
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Date: 9/5/2018 10:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Karen, it was amazing to see his picture on the phone a short time after he was born. Tom
Date: 9/5/2018 8:09:00 PM
Hello Tom … a charming and positive sonnet - nicely written - Lindsay
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Date: 9/5/2018 10:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Lindsay, I was on top of the world when I wrote it. Tom
Date: 9/5/2018 4:21:00 PM
GREAT poem, Tom! Janice
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Date: 9/5/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thank you very much Janice, happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 9/5/2018 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations Tom! Blessings to your daughter and your new grandson. Charlie
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Date: 9/5/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thank you very much Charlie, it was great to receive the news when we were on holiday, couldn't wait to get home. Tom
Date: 9/5/2018 1:23:00 AM
wow wow, double the fun. A poem of great joy!
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Date: 9/5/2018 3:18:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, had a great time and the wonderful news was the icing on the cake. Tom
Date: 9/4/2018 9:53:00 PM
Sounds wonderful, Tom!
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Date: 9/5/2018 3:17:00 AM
Thank you very much James. Regards Tom
Date: 9/3/2018 5:52:00 PM
Congrats! What wonderful news!
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Date: 9/3/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thank you Richard, it really made our day when we received the call. Tom
Date: 9/3/2018 2:46:00 PM
what a splendid write with a bonus offer--another grandson-- enjoy your moment, tom..huggs
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Date: 9/3/2018 5:12:00 PM
Thank you very much Nette, it was a lovely surprise for us all. Tom
Date: 9/3/2018 2:08:00 PM
Main course (vacation) topped off with the sweetest of desserts (grandson). Congrats, ~ gw
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Date: 9/3/2018 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Gershon, love your comment. Tom
Date: 9/3/2018 1:53:00 PM
Glad you not only enjoyed your vacation Tom, but also became a grandfather for a second time! Congratulations!! // paul
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Date: 9/3/2018 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Paul, we had a wonderful time but were anxious to get home to see him too. Tom
Date: 9/3/2018 8:49:00 AM
Congrats!!! grandpa Tom...you received a jewel from heaven...lovely sonnet my friend...love & birth...^WW^
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Date: 9/3/2018 8:58:00 AM
Thank you very much WW, we are so grateful for our heavenly gift. Tom
Date: 9/3/2018 2:16:00 AM
- Oh, enjoy this time Tom :) - Congratulations on this little prince :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2018 4:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Sunshine, he is a tiny little prince, held him on Saturday it felt so good. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 7:54:00 PM
Very good...free spirited write expressing the joys of life... the ultimate having a grandson in your arms... All the best Tom
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Date: 9/3/2018 1:02:00 AM
Thank you Arturo, it certainly brightened our day when we got the call. My daughter sent pics straight away but have since had the pleasure of holding him. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 7:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the birth of your new grandson! What an exciting and joyful event for you and your family! This is such a lovely sonnet in commemoration of this blessed occasion and of your enjoyable holiday in Florida! Best wishes to you and yours, Tom! Love, blessings, and much happiness always. Pandita
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Date: 9/3/2018 12:59:00 AM
Thank you Pandita, it was such a nice surprise to get the call, it certainly made our day, met him on Saturday for the first time. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 5:56:00 PM
How wonderful! A time you will always remember and hold dear. Congratulations on your new addition to your family! I loved reading of your joy in this poetic piece Tom. Nothing brings more joy than a newborn baby! : )
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Date: 9/3/2018 12:56:00 AM
Thank you Connie, it was a lovely surprise and we couldn't wait to see him. So when he's older I'll take him to Florida. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on becoming a grandad wonderful news and for writing this excellent sonnet Tom, I was in Florida in 1986 fantastic then though very humid, thanks for sharing my friend. :))
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Date: 9/2/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Roy. We had a great time and made it better when we got the good news, humidity was high and your clothes feel soggy after a day at the parks. We were lucky to have a pool at the house to cool off. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations Tom. Very nice ! :)
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Date: 9/2/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, it made our holiday better when we got the news. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations Tom! What a wonderland holiday and a lovely write! Happy Sunday !!
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Date: 9/2/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Mike, had a great time then we got the news whilst over there, it was great to meet him yesterday. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 3:55:00 AM
Wow! Rejoice in bliss and blessings Tom. I can feel the glee into your words.. the joy into your exquisite life moments.. An amazing cheering Sonnet! I'm happy for you Tom, congratulations! Enjoy "cradling your new grandson"! A great joy to read. Be blessed always.
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Date: 9/2/2018 4:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Besma, met him for the first time yesterday,we are all so happy and grateful. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 3:33:00 AM
After a wonderful holiday I'm sure you were so happy to get home to meet him Tom! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2018 3:38:00 AM
Thank you Jan, held him for the first time yesterday, so tiny. We wanted the holiday to speed up, great to be home to see him. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 3:15:00 AM
Marvelous news that a new life has just begun. May the Lord keep him healthy and help him grow to be as good a man as his grandfather. Thank you for sharing. Wonderful poem dear, Tom! It brought back memories of multiple trips I had in Florida when living in Canada. Happy you enjoyed your stay there!
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Date: 9/2/2018 3:41:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, met him for the first time yesterday, a little miracle. It was great to be home to meet him. Tom
Date: 9/2/2018 1:44:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your happiness in a wonderful poetic tribute to family time and the joys of new birth, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/2/2018 3:34:00 AM
Thank you Wendy a great time we had but seeing him yesterday was truly magical. Tom
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