Florence Pietà

Crafted in marble Over a period of years Discarded by the master For it's impurity smear Newly down from the cross Lay Jesus Christ In the arms of faith Thrice Nicodemus And Mary Magdalene With the Virgin Mary Complete the scene This sculptured beauty In rebuild recommission Completed by Calcagni Is Michelangelo's The Deposition My entry in Raul's contest " The Deposition " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/poetry-soup-3.php
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Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations James...this was a magnificent piece you penned here. Superb depiction of this artwork with your excellent imagery...thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Many thanks too for your always kind comments and words of encouragement. All is deeply appreciated! Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary
Haick Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, dear James! Excellent job! Peace and love to you, Audrey
Arteaga Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 12:45 PM
how great and congrats james well deserved!
George   Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Beautiful! James. Congratulations on your will deserved win. Love, Lainie, and thank you for your kind comments.
Delacroix Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 8:40 AM
Awesome! James, very well written. Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
Strand Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 8:16 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest James.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 7:53 AM
What a wonderful depiction of this inspiring artwork, James. Marvelous poem, and a well deserved win! Congratulations, dear poet friend, and Happy Holidays to you and yours! ~ Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 7:10 AM
Congrats James on your winning poem in Raul's contest... well deserved win for an excellent entry... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Moreno Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 3:06 AM
James, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 4:11 AM
wonderful.may ds one win d heart of Raul.thanks for congratulatory message on my featured poem.
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December 9, 2009 at 9:54 AM
Thanks for sharing a bit of history of the artwork and a message of faith that is timeless. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
Haick Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 12:43 PM
Great job on the challenging write, James! Good luck in Raul's "The Deposition" Contest!
Devonshire Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 12:11 AM
You have captured the artist's spirit in this write, James, and your research has provided details not contained in the other fine entries for this competition. Again, you win my admiration and praise. Wishing you luck in the contest and love in the holiday season, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 7:56 PM
I imagine we will all meet our deposition soon enough. Light & Love
Thomas Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 6:52 PM
Good luck in the contest, and I hope you and your loved ones have a wonderful holiday season! ~Juliane
Bono Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 6:07 PM
I posted a christmas poem
Peranteau Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Just beautiful Mr. Fraser !!!!! How warm this is ! james
Sweetheart Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Just had to read this again James.. so beautiful a depiction ... thankxxx for your wonderful comments on so many of the poems u read from my efforts the past two days... much appreciated... the tag was so fun.. yes? blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
Sweetheart Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 10:17 PM
Magnificent entry into Raul's contest ... good luck .. I wrote Manifesto which I know u already read... such a challenge this one... great piece Highlander... luv Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" P.S.
Culverhouse Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 6:53 PM
wonderful, nicely penned!!
Goff Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 4:07 PM
wonderful entry! my very talented friend! jimbo
Chircop Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 2:32 PM
Indeed a Sculptured poem you gave us to read about the great Michelangelo's Deposition..EXCELLENT -BRAVO--Charma
Sheart Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Great job James on this Ecphrasis. A new form for me. I'll have to look it up. Looks like a winner to me. Best of luck in Raul's contest! Keep writing!!Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Nicely done write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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