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Flooded

rain fell from her eyes no one was there to catch them-- so she drowned her heart **october 19, 2010

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Kash Poet

Date: 1/29/2011 8:19:00 PM

Very sad and emotional-kashinath

Date: 10/30/2010 9:25:00 AM

The emotion comes through your words in a heartfelt way. So much captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!!! Karen

De R

Date: 10/21/2010 11:22:00 AM

A very sad and wonderful write, nikko.. I'm doing fine, thanx for asking, but so so busy, I don't have time to write:( How about you? And what's wrong with your name?!Tried to read it and it gave me a big headache:)) Hugs, Emilia:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2010 6:38:00 AM

Nikko, did you catch that weird name I gave was my own full name spelled backwards?

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/20/2010 7:14:00 AM

beautiful and so sad. Harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/20/2010 7:08:00 AM

Sad write Nikko, but I also reckon tears tend to signify strength.. okay thats just my opinion ;) hugs

Steven Mossburg

Date: 10/19/2010 6:04:00 PM

oooh...very nice. I love this. So profound. We really do need some one to lean on now and again

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2010 7:24:00 PM

oh, Nikko, this is a very good senryu. VEry descriptive with just the three lines. About my Halloweening poem, what were you talking about the words costume and a in abandon. I didnt' get that part? As for Dale, he is my stepbrother who liked to stay out very late with me trick or treating, the one killed by a drunk driver as he sat on a curb in Houston. He was such a wonderful guy! Luv, Andrea

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/18/2010 1:15:00 PM

Very sad, Nikko. Hope you are doing better now. Sometimes writing about our problems helps. Take care, Diane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/18/2010 11:13:00 AM

My mom used to say, "Let a smile be your umbrella." Very touching senryu, Nikko. I saw the weather warnings for the Phillipines, too, and hope you are in a safe place. Love, Carolyn

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/18/2010 10:35:00 AM

so sad and poignant.. it's expressed so well..take care~Deb

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/18/2010 10:32:00 AM

That happens very often when one is isolated, Nikko

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/18/2010 10:06:00 AM

A beautiful expression of sadness of the heart. Lovely write. God Bless Phyl