Floating On Sea of Sunflowers

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Floating on sea of sunflowers, Trembling in the summersault breeze. Each sun of seeds uplifts my smile. Each blooming orb, sets me at ease. Trembling in the summersault breeze, Vainglorious with giant stems, Each blooming orb, sets me at ease - The peace of God in brilliant gems. Vainglorious with giant stems, The peak of xanthous petal-waves, The peace of God in brilliant gems. His glory-light brightens my eyes. The peak of xanthous petal-waves, Each sun of seeds uplifts my smile. His glory-light brightens my eyes. Floating on sea of sunflowers. 8/17/2022 Pantoum with gentle rhyming

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Valsa George

Date: 8/17/2022 9:52:00 PM

Pantoum is a difficult form for me . But you have written a beautiful pantoum and with such ease ! Your eyes and heart are brightened by His smile !How lucky, you are Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2022 3:44:00 AM

Bless you and thank you, sweet Valsa!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/17/2022 6:49:00 PM

Awesome pic-pantoum combo here, Kim. Plant a field of sunflowers, and they will come. They will come. ~ Field of Dreamer

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2022 8:05:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/17/2022 9:30:00 AM

Oh, how I love a good pantoum! You have written a really good one, Kim. Some folks find these difficult, but it seems it has come very easy for you. Excellent!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2022 10:13:00 AM

I enjoy writing them very much! God bless you, Milton! Thank you for your vote of confidence! Hugs ~ Kim

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/17/2022 7:29:00 AM

Wow! You make it look so easy ~ I know it isn’t

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2022 9:26:00 AM

Thanks so much! Hugs ~ Kim