Floating On Sea of Sunflowers

Floating on sea of sunflowers,
Trembling in the summersault breeze.
Each sun of seeds uplifts my smile.
Each blooming orb, sets me at ease.

Trembling in the summersault breeze,
Vainglorious with giant stems,
Each blooming orb, sets me at ease -
The peace of God in brilliant gems.

Vainglorious with giant stems,
The peak of xanthous petal-waves,
The peace of God in brilliant gems.
His glory-light brightens my eyes.

The peak of xanthous petal-waves,
Each sun of seeds uplifts my smile.
His glory-light brightens my eyes.
Floating on sea of sunflowers.

8/17/2022
Pantoum with gentle rhyming

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Paige Hind

September 2, 2024 at 6:48 PM

I love your patoum, I really like this form anyway...and you did it justice, it's beautiful

Valsa George

August 17, 2022 at 9:52 PM

Pantoum is a difficult form for me . But you have written a beautiful pantoum and with such ease ! Your eyes and heart are brightened by His smile !How lucky, you are Kim

Kim Rodrigues

August 18, 2022 at 3:44 AM

Bless you and thank you, sweet Valsa!

Gershon Wolf

August 17, 2022 at 6:49 PM

Awesome pic-pantoum combo here, Kim. Plant a field of sunflowers, and they will come. They will come. ~ Field of Dreamer

Kim Rodrigues

August 17, 2022 at 8:05 PM

Thanks, Gershon!

L Milton Hankins

August 17, 2022 at 9:30 AM

Oh, how I love a good pantoum! You have written a really good one, Kim. Some folks find these difficult, but it seems it has come very easy for you. Excellent!

Kim Rodrigues

August 17, 2022 at 10:13 AM

I enjoy writing them very much! God bless you, Milton! Thank you for your vote of confidence! Hugs ~ Kim