Floating On Ice

Washed up at sea,
It’s hard to breathe,
It’s hard to think,

Mouth filled with salt,
I can’t speak,
I struggle but remain weak,

The sun in my eyes,
I survived
I’m alive,

Air sweeps through my hair,
Sand against my bare skin,
Gasps for air from within,

On my back at last,
I choke up a laugh,
Finally escaping the past,
I belong in the crash,

My limbs are limp,
My heart is ready,
Bring on the everlasting,

Bring on my passions,
My dreams and fears,
All those things I’m afraid to hold dear,

I’m here to live,
And to love life,
Easing my way into a sigh,

Cold water rushes past,
I’m pulled back to sea,
Directionless, Anxious. Free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

 Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
Brown Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 2:10 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Jennica. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 9:22 AM
If this is not true, it sure sounds it. Either way , a great write. Well done Jennica!-Robert
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace