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Tail-Rhyme
A Tail-Rhyme (also known as a tailed-rhyme) has a specific structure. The piece starts with a couplet or a triplet of rhymed lines. This set of couplets or triplets is then followed by a "tail," which does not rhyme with the couplet or triplet that preceded it. The tail line is shorter than the couplet or triplet lines. In a (tail-rhyme stanza),  the tail lines rhyme.                   

                                

 

Once, when I was barely three I climbed up the tallest tree while Gramma was scolding me; but I didn't care. A diaper parachute left me in my birthday suit and I must've looked so cute, floating in mid-air. I recall drifting for miles soliciting ahs and smiles, my butt made the X-files where they gawk and stare. Reaching my destination at the local train station I felt no hesitation, and landed right there. On catching a ride back home my folks forbade me to roam though I felt as light as foam, it's all true, I swear!

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Date: 7/25/2023 4:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Well done
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2023 8:11:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/25/2023 4:05:00 PM
i was howling at diaper parachute lol many congrats Emile:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/26/2023 8:11:00 AM
Thanks, Jan; I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/7/2022 9:38:00 AM
Clever write for your winning entry in the contest. The imagery really tells quite a fascinating tale! :)Paulette
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/7/2022 10:04:00 AM
Thanks, Paulette; I appreciate your comments my friend Emile.
Date: 5/6/2022 10:35:00 AM
Very clever poem, Emile :) Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/7/2022 10:03:00 AM
Thanks, Ann; I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/5/2022 7:50:00 AM
Good one, Emile! CONGRAT on your win. Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2022 9:09:00 AM
Thanks, Janice, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/5/2022 6:28:00 AM
You had me at diaper parachute. Enjoyed this! Congrats
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2022 9:09:00 AM
Thanks, Jeff, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/11/2022 11:09:00 AM
I smiled from beginning to end. Nicely written, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/11/2022 5:03:00 PM
Thanks, Jenna, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/10/2022 11:42:00 AM
Hello Emile, I find this poem very sweet. It made me smile. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/12/2022 10:46:00 AM
Hello Emile, yes it is all in fun. Happy Easter my friend. Darlene.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2022 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene, is all in fun, have a great day my friend, Emile.

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