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Floating

As I was going to meet some friends, 
I saw our national flag floating ,
                 some soldiers were singing 
 national anthem, everyone stopped 
Untill  they finished the song. 
 A school bus passed,
 some hanged balloons were floating 
While students were singing  
loudly in the bus. 
The driver seemed to be late with students 
because he was rushing. 
Some people complained 
about such high speed. 
I thought about what could happen to him 
if he met some traffic police officers 
before reaching the school. 
It was not my business to focus 
so much on it , 
( at other hand I am a parent ) 
Imagine if the bus collapsed,  
some parents could lose their children. 
I thought the driver was drunk, 
But it was early morning ...
Yes , some drinkers don't have specific time
to drink when they are addicted to alcohol. 
I met them at one hindu restaurant in town, 
some flags of different colours were floating outside 
the restaurant and other hindu shop.
We took some cups of black coffee
as it was so cold. 
Later on , we left the restaurant to the port 
to get the tickets to go back home. 
The cruise ship was floating on lake kuvu 
to Bukavu port. 
After few hours we reached port of Bukavu
 and took taxi to Uvira. 


...Third place in the Contest...

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Date: 10/9/2023 2:42:00 PM
Alfonso, congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
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Thank you for visit and compliment. You are welcome
Date: 9/25/2023 1:26:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, Alfonso. I hope you will read and comment on some of my poetry and follow me so we can get to know each other and become friends. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/24/2023 8:02:00 PM
FLOATING September 24/2023 Fading, Floating, Fluttering Words Poetry Contest
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