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20.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Fading, Floating, Fluttering Words -
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

Touched by the sweet lips of the wind Float away from misery and the doubtful world From cradle to grave, back to nature's primeval days Above the dust of the earth, a weightless state With grateful heart, but weeping eyes Changing fates, that found the world so merciless No wreath of soft down or bay leaves to tie Soar freely on ambitious lightweight wings Search here and there, high and low - in wrath and passion The palm of honor stands strong, free, brave and proud Reborn from pink marble chamber, the child of love A fresh morning floods, with sparkling champagne sun The glow changes in the pearl, brought the mercy back The wings of the pigeons intertwined

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Constance La France

Date: 10/9/2023 2:31:00 PM

Anne-Lise, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love your image, Constance

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/24/2023 6:17:00 AM

Very beautiful. I am charmed. Love.

Silent One

Date: 9/22/2023 11:18:00 AM

Love the opening to your poem.. great use of words to create your poetic vision.. I found your poem uplifting and serene...s ome lovely imagery here also..

Deb M

Date: 9/21/2023 4:00:00 PM

Your poem oozes tranquility….you had me floating Sunshine! Beautifully written…..Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2023 1:38:00 AM

- Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Deb :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 9/21/2023 12:08:00 PM

Nice work. Great imagery and emotions.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2023 1:37:00 AM

- Many thanks Jay, for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/21/2023 7:49:00 AM

Oh yes Anne Lise this is lovely. A truly beautiful Poem. Best wishes SV

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2023 1:37:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.V. :) - hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/21/2023 7:22:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, the emotions of your verse are expressed with airy breathtaking finesse. Brilliant imagery. Deep, rich and exquisite! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2023 1:36:00 AM

- Susan, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/21/2023 5:37:00 AM

Float away from misery and the doubtful world--so well said, Anne-Lise. I like the missives of your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2023 1:36:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/21/2023 3:50:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive lines penned in this one. How often would we like to float on dove's wings about life's problems. Thank you for sharing this one and for your visits to my pages. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2023 1:35:00 AM

- Sara, thank you so much for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/21/2023 3:04:00 AM

A poem you should be proud of. So many wonderful thoughts in this poem. Well done, Anne Lise. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2023 1:35:00 AM

- Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Victor :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/20/2023 2:57:00 PM

Lovely poetry Anne-Lise, if only we could “float away from the misery and the doubtful world” and “ Soar freely on ambitious lightweight wings* wouldn’t it be a wonderful thing… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2023 2:28:00 AM

- Only in our thoughts... a nice feeling, Belle - Thank you so much for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/20/2023 2:02:00 PM

Enjoyed your exquisite poem with deep thoughts, Dear Anne-Lise. Your images are stunning!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2023 2:23:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, dear Mala - Always a pleasure :) - hugs