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Flirt

Step by step
Flirt by flirt
Dance by dance
The sky advanced

Slant and twirl
In eye curl
Wild sea gull
Desire glanced

Sailing ships
Blossoming lips
Freedom fission
Moments danced

Smile by smile
Conquering miles
Into the Nile
I’m entranced
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8/12/2016

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Forrest Pasky Date: 12/30/2016 10:28:00 AM I really liked this piece. It jumped out at me as I was starting to look a bit deeper into some work. Look forward to reading more. Forrest Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/30/2016 11:31:00 AM Thank you ...

Jannie Breedt Date: 12/29/2016 5:26:00 AM You left so much unsaid that me thinks you have been a naughty boy. Excellent topic. Very sexy Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/29/2016 6:01:00 AM ha ha .. the contest theme did this ... not me ...

Sandison Jumbo Date: 12/15/2016 6:35:00 AM I love this! Saying much with few words. It also has a beat to it. Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/16/2016 8:21:00 AM Thank you ...

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/10/2016 6:22:00 PM Very enchanting poem, Probir. I really like the rhythm of this poem. Cool romanticism. Must be the lover in you. Love the poem though. Love and peace to you. Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/11/2016 12:03:00 AM Thank you ...

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/10/2016 1:22:00 PM Excellent, congrats! Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/11/2016 12:03:00 AM Thank you ...

Paloma P Date: 12/10/2016 11:26:00 AM It has its own upbeat tempo, flirting with nature and beyond. Congrats. Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/11/2016 12:04:00 AM Thank you ...

Claudia Polydoro Date: 12/9/2016 6:27:00 PM I really liked it Probir :) Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/9/2016 7:52:00 PM Thank you ...

Jean Murray Date: 12/9/2016 7:03:00 AM Congratulations Probir. It's entrancing. Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/9/2016 9:18:00 AM Thank you ...

Francis J Grasso Date: 12/9/2016 6:02:00 AM Well done, Probir! Congratulations! ... Fran Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/9/2016 9:18:00 AM Thank you ...

Gary Smith Date: 12/9/2016 4:04:00 AM Congratulations Probir :) Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/9/2016 4:54:00 AM Thank you ...

Lewis Raynes Date: 12/8/2016 9:39:00 PM A super cool flirt write Probir, thank you for entering, congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/9/2016 12:29:00 AM Thank you for the sponsorship and consideration ... Glad you liked it ....

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/8/2016 3:16:00 PM - Enjoy reading this, lovely Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/8/2016 8:32:00 PM Thank you, Anne ...

Agnes Krampe Date: 12/8/2016 7:28:00 AM Lovely, Probir. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/8/2016 8:24:00 AM Thank you, Agnes ...

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/8/2016 7:20:00 AM Lovely, Probir! Saving as a favorite! 7+ Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/8/2016 8:25:00 AM Thank you, Kim ...

White Wolf Date: 12/7/2016 8:50:00 PM Beautiful and seductive, Probir. Login to Reply Probir Gupta Date: 12/7/2016 11:16:00 PM Thank you ...