Probir Gupta Poet Rhyme

Flirt

Step by step
Flirt by flirt
Dance by dance
The sky advanced

Slant and twirl
In eye curl
Wild sea gull
Desire glanced

Sailing ships
Blossoming lips
Freedom fission
Moments danced

Smile by smile
Conquering miles
Into the Nile
I’m entranced
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8/12/2016

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Forrest Pasky December 30, 2016 at 10:28 AM I really liked this piece. It jumped out at me as I was starting to look a bit deeper into some work. Look forward to reading more. Forrest Probir Gupta December 30, 2016 at 11:31 AM Thank you ...

Jannie Breedt December 29, 2016 at 5:26 AM You left so much unsaid that me thinks you have been a naughty boy. Excellent topic. Very sexy Probir Gupta December 29, 2016 at 6:01 AM ha ha .. the contest theme did this ... not me ...

Sandison Jumbo December 15, 2016 at 6:35 AM I love this! Saying much with few words. It also has a beat to it. Probir Gupta December 16, 2016 at 8:21 AM Thank you ...

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 10, 2016 at 6:22 PM Very enchanting poem, Probir. I really like the rhythm of this poem. Cool romanticism. Must be the lover in you. Love the poem though. Love and peace to you. Probir Gupta December 11, 2016 at 12:03 AM Thank you ...

Richard Lamoureux December 10, 2016 at 1:22 PM Excellent, congrats! Probir Gupta December 11, 2016 at 12:03 AM Thank you ...

Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 11:26 AM It has its own upbeat tempo, flirting with nature and beyond. Congrats. Probir Gupta December 11, 2016 at 12:04 AM Thank you ...

Claudia Polydoro December 9, 2016 at 6:27 PM I really liked it Probir :) Probir Gupta December 9, 2016 at 7:52 PM Thank you ...

Jean Murray December 9, 2016 at 7:03 AM Congratulations Probir. It's entrancing. Probir Gupta December 9, 2016 at 9:18 AM Thank you ...

Francis J Grasso December 9, 2016 at 6:02 AM Well done, Probir! Congratulations! ... Fran Probir Gupta December 9, 2016 at 9:18 AM Thank you ...

Gary Smith December 9, 2016 at 4:04 AM Congratulations Probir :) Probir Gupta December 9, 2016 at 4:54 AM Thank you ...

Lewis Raynes December 8, 2016 at 9:39 PM A super cool flirt write Probir, thank you for entering, congratulations on your win. Probir Gupta December 9, 2016 at 12:29 AM Thank you for the sponsorship and consideration ... Glad you liked it ....

Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2016 at 3:16 PM - Enjoy reading this, lovely Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta December 8, 2016 at 8:32 PM Thank you, Anne ...

Agnes Krampe December 8, 2016 at 7:28 AM Lovely, Probir. Good luck in the contest. Probir Gupta December 8, 2016 at 8:24 AM Thank you, Agnes ...

Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2016 at 7:20 AM Lovely, Probir! Saving as a favorite! 7+ Probir Gupta December 8, 2016 at 8:25 AM Thank you, Kim ...

White Wolf December 7, 2016 at 8:50 PM Beautiful and seductive, Probir. Probir Gupta December 7, 2016 at 11:16 PM Thank you ...