Flirt

Step by step
Flirt by flirt
Dance by dance
The sky advanced

Slant and twirl
In eye curl
Wild sea gull
Desire glanced

Sailing ships
Blossoming lips
Freedom fission
Moments danced

Smile by smile
Conquering miles
Into the Nile
I’m entranced
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8/12/2016

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Forrest Pasky

Date: 12/30/2016 10:28:00 AM

I really liked this piece. It jumped out at me as I was starting to look a bit deeper into some work. Look forward to reading more. Forrest

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/30/2016 11:31:00 AM

Thank you ...

Jannie Breedt

Date: 12/29/2016 5:26:00 AM

You left so much unsaid that me thinks you have been a naughty boy. Excellent topic. Very sexy

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/29/2016 6:01:00 AM

ha ha .. the contest theme did this ... not me ...

Sandison Jumbo

Date: 12/15/2016 6:35:00 AM

I love this! Saying much with few words. It also has a beat to it.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/16/2016 8:21:00 AM

Thank you ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/10/2016 6:22:00 PM

Very enchanting poem, Probir. I really like the rhythm of this poem. Cool romanticism. Must be the lover in you. Love the poem though. Love and peace to you.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 12:03:00 AM

Thank you ...