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Flipped Hourglass

Flipped hourglass: a slipped tide or a passed second, Has moved, like drop in a flowing river, beckoned; Hourglass, an automaton, cannot run itself, Humans must be at its beck and call, like an elf... Flipped hourglass: a slipped tide or a passed second, Has moved, like drop in a flowing river, beckoned; Hourglass, an automaton, cannot run itself, Humans must be at its beck-and-call, like an elf... Times bind; we are bound; we at the mercy of time; Wrist watch ties us; rather, us tying its chill chime; With time we slip; unable to follow its flow, Flipping with it we flip; our movements being slow... Doesn't flip hourglass denote human existence? With its fleeting, flowing and flopping in tight, tense; Sand filled in is like air puffed up in our body, Leak enough to leave the clock and body, shoddy...! I had an hourglass, so smart-looking, glamorous! I admired its function, and almost stood speechless; My obligations and dead-lines remained undone, Sand slipped; I slipped with it unknowingly; Like fun...! Flowing with the time we could flow the time for us, Buddha said, none can dip in the same river twice; Time is fix flex flux; changing, churning, endlessly, Pleads us to care it; keep going eternally...! 28 January 2022 Pick-A-Title, Vol 28 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/19/2022 7:04:00 AM
Belated congratulations on such a profound write..
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Date: 2/14/2022 3:44:00 PM
BIG congrats on this superb write and a superb win, Christuraj.
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Date: 2/17/2022 5:40:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 2/13/2022 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations Chris on your great win for a poem studded with arresting imagery and profound thoughts on time !
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Date: 2/17/2022 5:39:00 AM
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Date: 2/13/2022 7:43:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Christuraj:-) A philosophical, fantastic poem with striking imagery throughout. Bravo!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/13/2022 8:05:00 AM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity.
Date: 1/28/2022 6:46:00 PM
VillanRhyme, the description intense, like the sands of time when its chamber is empty, I will relish in the time I spent! Thank you for your beautiful poem
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Date: 1/28/2022 7:47:00 PM
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Date: 1/28/2022 2:24:00 PM
Very enjoyable read. The theme of time’s flow and the word play invites a read over. Thanks for you visit today to my poems. Best, SuZ
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/28/2022 7:47:00 PM
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Date: 1/28/2022 6:07:00 AM
A really deep, philosophical poem, Christuraj! So many great lines - in rhyme, and you have used alliteration so beautifully - I am amazed! I like the use of alliteration - "With its fleeting, flowing and flopping in tight", and also "Time is fix flex flux; changing, churning, endlessly," to add to the depth of the theme. My Fave, Dear Friend. Thank you for reading my translations, and other poems. Your comments are most valuable.
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Date: 1/28/2022 7:48:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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