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Flightless Birds Trapped In A Gilded Cage. . Fledgling innocents incarcerated in a gilded ornate cage Budding pretty flowers Within the blossoming of youth Of tender sensitive age . Born into an imperial dynasty By destiny and decree A view from a palace window To the outside world Was all they’d often see Far from the peasant underclass Living in the gutter of poverty . Each one an individual With different varied traits With nothing but love in their tender hearts For they’re parents Unaware of their countries fate . Ripples of unrest and anger Soon turned into waves of hatred For a seemingly Uncaring despondent regime Toward the Tzar the affluent nobility And the withdrawn empress Queen . The hungry angry peasants revolted And stormed the palace gates And for the Royal family There was no escape . Sewing precious jewels inside their clothing They were forced to leave their comfortable dwelling And taken prisoners to a place far away Where they tried to make the best Of life in where they had to stay . Unsure of their fate lost in fantasy and dreams The revolutionist planned their fate and schemed One day they were taken to a cellar And told they were about to die They must have been terrified And no doubt Screamed and cried . Shots were fired at the family And many bullets ricocheted Bouncing of the clothing Where the jewels wee hidden away But eventually blood was spilled Sending the family to an early grave . Peter Dome©2021.

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Date: 1/4/2021 10:28:00 PM
A terrible fate all because the regime did not care for the poor. I wrote a poem on a gilded cage but mine is totally different. Subjects often coincide. Eve Roper wrote on a train. So did I but there is no comparisons between them. I loved your poem very much. The poor will always rebel if not treated like humans. ~~
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/5/2021 10:18:00 AM
Same old story. the rich with the biggest stick, prosper, while the poor suffer. Russia probably suffered the most. a terrible history.I'd love to read your poem when I get a chance. thank you. take care. Pete.
Date: 1/4/2021 9:17:00 PM
Yes the 19 and early 20th century were indeed a highlight of two extremes, and some of the royals in Europe paid the ultimate price..This poem Pete, brings out the realism of how it was for those in Russia, and an exceptional piece of work it is...To my Favourites..
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/5/2021 10:12:00 AM
Hi Harry thank you for your kind comments. much appreciated. Russia suffered greatly as toy say. Starlin was probably worse than Hitler, he killed more. the story of the Tsar and family, had always touched me deeply.Take care. Pete.
Date: 1/4/2021 3:30:00 PM
Hello Peter, oh yes this poem is very sad. I had tearsin my eyes as I read this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. x
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/6/2021 8:03:00 AM
Hello Peter, Peter, I have felt you are my friend. We are friends. so you know. You create great poetry as well You are very nice to Your welcome Petrer .x.
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/4/2021 3:41:00 PM
Bless I'm so sorry Darlene. It is sad, when you get to know the full story even more so.Please friend me if you wish. you are a great talent and such a nice Lady. take care and thank you. Pete. X.

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