Flight To Atlanta

We float together above the earth,
The clouds and I.
They form layers.
From above, they are fluffy white and pristine.
Below, dirty gray and flat.
A skim of flotsam that seeks a place to settle.
A sheet of marble.

Then changing to rows of cotton planted 
Two on four. Ready to strip and bale.
The ground between shows shadows
That gallop like wild mustangs on the open plain.
They are the darker of the twins,
And remind of the limits of light and sky.
Yen and Yang, the balance.
Each an ink blot that would test Rorschach.

Now becoming forever white like 
Deep and driven drifts of snow.
Or, white icing on an endless sheet of cake.
Small peaks are skillfully placed
By nature’s cleaver hand.

Towers of misty clouds climb above the rest
And become smoke from a fire
Or steam from a boiling pot.
Smoke signals.

Moving through the climbing vapor
Gives the ride a rattle and rumble
As driving on a country road.
Windows become foggy glasses that
Clear without a wipe.

The cloud ahead becomes an angry mountain
That towers above and darkens the ground below.
With admiration and respect,
We circle,,,and wait
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Richards Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 5:23 PM
Hi Ray ! I am so glad I stopped by this one! I haven't been on PS very much lately, but was so pleased to see your comments. This in turn gave me a chance to see this wonderful poem. I am awed by the vision from your seat on the plane, and the talent you have being able to put pen to paper :) I couldn't help think of my daughter who texted me this morning, as she was boarding her flight to Santa Fe. I hope she saw such beauty as this ! :)
Rainwater Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 11:34 PM
nice written .. lovley... can u comment on some of mine please \ let me know how i am doing thank you god bless
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 5:26 PM
wow, Ray it's been a while, and I see YOU are still right ON as well!! Once you got it, you got it, my friend. This picture of sky in flight is awesome.
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 5:26 PM
A win I see it had too. Belated congrats
Dalei Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Very outstanding Imagism. I like all the metaphors u used. Enjoyed..............// hugs
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September 18, 2016 at 1:41 AM
Ray, Congratulations on your sweet win. Thank you so much for the support. Stop by my blog "CERTIFYING OLD AGE (and a baby)" if you'd like. Always & Forever..... LINDA
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