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Flight Design Falls

She flies unhindered, flies so high Heavenly sigh She boasts great flight With her sure might The flight design falls from her tail And drifts and wails Falls down slowly Thrusting ably The ignition switch of her flight Now sits here tight Merry weather Token feather
Russell Sivey Entrant into nette onclaud's "JUST A MINUTE!" contest 10/10/2012

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Date: 10/29/2012 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Nette's "Just A Minute" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2012 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. i great poem, I want to soar with this wonderful bird.
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Date: 10/27/2012 8:23:00 PM
Oh, LOVE the word TOKEN here. Such a play, intentional, yes? We use tokens often to travel, too.... token and all its meanings works so well here. Congrats on the win. Excellent! Hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 10/27/2012 9:39:00 AM
this is sure cute. Glad I am finally getting to see it, Russell. VERY well done and congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/27/2012 8:24:00 AM
Well done, nice win.
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Date: 10/27/2012 3:54:00 AM
Big congratulations Russell, well done xx
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Date: 10/26/2012 10:51:00 PM
Many congrats Russell for this awesome win.
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:27:00 PM
Russell, congratulations in Nette's "JUST A MINUTE!" contest.. wishing you well.. xox~PD
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Date: 10/11/2012 6:46:00 AM
Your ending to this is just superb Russell, wishing you the best for Nette's contest.. I love how you tackle the contests :)
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Date: 10/11/2012 4:53:00 AM
interesting, original, lovely
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Date: 10/10/2012 9:47:00 PM
yes great intrigueing rhyming work, Rhyming Russel feathers lurk...
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