Flight 800

The iron thing leaped 
Tiger like at the son
Not quite Icarus in madness from reasons sane
It growled with pain
And shuddered to the brim of tantalized hearts
So all who did not blink saw
Against the sheet of morning light
The debris like feathers
Littering the sorrow of the sea.

And I pondering asked
Just because its wings sizzled off
Could it not swim
Away from the tyranny of fate?
We are such feeble kings
If we cannot recall tomorrow,
If we cannot bind today
And we cannot guarantee tomorrow.
Without power to change time
We change nothing at all,
But are changed to believe
We rule the world
When truly we are ruled.

Out of the gray waters
Out of the salt sea
Comes the dawn bleeding
Tears ... dry as Sahara's sands they fall
Over the earth, a curtain of light
Separating us from memory and gall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Shetley Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 3:36 PM
Your talent leaves me in breathless awe. Such a powerful and poignant piece. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love.
K. Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 4:37 AM
Wow this sure is such a stirring poem, David and so eloquently written, that line about "debris littering the sorrow of the sea" was just captivating-- you sure used memorable lines here-- very moving indeed-- nikko :)
Kapoor Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 7:53 AM
Quite a serious and interesting write. Your second para is extremely lovely. Beautiful write my friend. And thanks for appreciating the poem quoted by me of Douglas Malloch. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....David Smalling
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 1:02 PM
A compelling piece David. Very well written. I can relate. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Aloha, Connie
Devonshire Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 4:00 PM
David, I was captivated by your first verse. So many lives lost in that debris. You gave life to the airplane comparing it to a tiger, but unlike most animals, planes just sink into the sea with "wings sizzled off." Indeed, we are "feeble kings" who are ruled insted of rulers. Excellent poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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