Fleur Noire

Fleur noir
Fleur effrayée le soir 
Fleur de la nuit
Fleur invisible
Fleur qui n'a jamais touché la pluie
Une fleur qui n’a  jamais dansé dans le vent
Une fleur qui ne chante
La fleur qui se cache nue
S`est jamais souvenu 
Une fleur qui est tout simplement
Une petite fleur
Toutes les fleurs avec des pétales brisés
Enfin réunis
Au-dessus de mon cercueil
Aujourd'hui, vous êtes tous au soleil
Je dors avec la lune

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Date: 5/15/2016 7:26:00 PM
With my background in romance languages I could actually get the gist of this beautiful poem until the very end. So I found the translation and LOVE what you wrote: Today you are all in the sun I sleep with the moon That is fantastic!!
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Etienne Lariviere
Date: 5/20/2016 12:27:00 AM
Merci you are beautiful lady
Date: 3/19/2016 9:08:00 PM
Etienne, magnifique, beau poeme, mon ami - I am loving this 7 ~
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Etienne Lariviere
Date: 5/20/2016 12:26:00 AM
Merci merci
Date: 2/14/2016 1:31:00 AM
This is lovely with a profound and poignant ending. Magnifique mon ami! Traduire afin que d'autres peuvent en profiter ! ;)
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Etienne Lariviere
Date: 3/19/2016 3:39:00 PM
Merci bien Connie!
Date: 2/13/2016 4:14:00 PM
beau poème mon ami
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Etienne Lariviere
Date: 3/19/2016 3:39:00 PM
merci irish frere
Date: 2/13/2016 3:05:00 PM
I translated the poem Etienne although I guessed it was about a black flower of the night - very deep and sad imagery especially the final two lines:-( hugs jan xx
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Etienne Lariviere
Date: 3/19/2016 3:38:00 PM
Merci cheri
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