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Fleeting Sighs

Each season breathes a fleeting sigh,
 Spring bestows gifts of renewal
 Leaving blooms before its goodbye

 Summer sizzles with warmth and zest
 We lose ourselves in its blue skies
 Finding relaxation and rest

 Autumn then sets the trees ablaze
 And brings a chilling wind our way
 In winter, snowflakes catch our gaze

 10-23-2020
 Writing Challenge - Tercets Contest
 Sponsor: Constance La France
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Downing  Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 6:36 AM
This is fabulous, I love it! And congratulations on your win :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 1:30 PM
congrats on a well deserved win, Joseph.
Proxenos Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:40 AM
The four seasons of the years so skillfully intertwined and creatively expressed - congratulations on your win, truly deserved. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
La France Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this wonderful write, I love your image too _Constance
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 12:09 AM
Congratulations on your win, Joseph. Hugs Eve
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 2:32 PM
Congratulations, Joseph, on your win for this beautiful piece!!
Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 12:10 PM
Beautiful journey through the seasons Joseph. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Chamberlain Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations on your win. :-)
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:15 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Koplin Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your win!!
Nicole Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 9:03 PM
You paint such beautiful images with your words. Each Season we embrace in a different way. Once again, I love what you have created. I wish to place this in my favorites. :) Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:26 PM
short and sweet and very seasonal, Joseph!
One Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:13 AM
Great imagery... You did justice to this contest..
Buhagiar Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 11:17 PM
Great tercets about current seasons. Best for a win. ~~
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 12:40 PM
Wonderful glimpses of seasons, Joseph--great images.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Gorgeous Tercets Joseph; well done. Good luck in the contest.
Y. Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 7:42 AM
Hi Joseph, This is a good entry about the seasons in the Tercel form. The imagery and content was on point as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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