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Fleeting Shadows

Dancing shadows along the path They play a game of hide and seek Playful while the sunshine peeks between each branch of beech and ash the boughs and leaves of autumn's grasp Dancing across the top of golden leaves Flirting little sprites, between the pavers, peek Gleeful breezes sweeping them along Wily, jumping silhouettes, as if their ploy to tease They mimic trees, above the street Fickle dancers, 'till day is done, then off they go to sleep!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/25/2012 5:46:00 PM
A really cute one, my friend. Congrats in this contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/23/2012 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading this creative this rainy afternoon..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2012 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this entry. You have a bunch of descriptive metaphors here.
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, love it. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:16:00 AM
Like this a lot Carrie. Nicely written. Congratulations
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Date: 1/22/2012 7:41:00 AM
congrats Carrie on HM for this beautiful creation of poetic art ..luv..
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Date: 11/17/2009 1:06:00 PM
Very descriptive Free Verse. I especially like the line Free as breezes sweeping them along. Keep writing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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Date: 11/17/2009 8:49:00 AM
Beautiful flow and rhyming... this trips right off the tongue! Lovely sentiment and wonderful imagery! Well done, Carrie!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:35:00 PM
Oh Ms C, I do miss your writing. I see what you write and I'd like to be in a hammock watching.
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Date: 11/14/2009 7:14:00 PM
We're thinking alike. I posted a similar poem tonight. Yours is lovely. Thank you for your remarks. Love, Joyce
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