Flaws of Love

The more I uncover in you
The more that I have a clue
The invisible defects 
That I didn't quite get
Maybe we should be through.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 7:04 PM
good one for uncovering those flaws!!
Mcmahon Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 11:07 PM
good stuff nice emotion and i like the twist on the traditional limerick style
Pettit Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 7:49 PM
A different twist on the limerick style of expression. Love certainly has many flaws, and you have described a failing relationship quite well here.
Mehta Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 3:05 AM
Nice take on the inner side of a person, very meaningful, kristen
Horsman Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:20 PM
You're quite a philosopher Kristen, this is so profound, enjoyed, Harry
Matt Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:31 PM
Nice...the invisible defects, the inside of a person can make even the most beautiful people ugly. Really like this one, ~Chris
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