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Flaws of Love

The more I uncover in you The more that I have a clue The invisible defects That I didn't quite get Maybe we should be through.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2011 7:04:00 PM
good one for uncovering those flaws!!
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Date: 1/19/2011 11:07:00 PM
good stuff nice emotion and i like the twist on the traditional limerick style
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Date: 1/19/2011 7:49:00 PM
A different twist on the limerick style of expression. Love certainly has many flaws, and you have described a failing relationship quite well here.
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Date: 1/19/2011 3:05:00 AM
Nice take on the inner side of a person, very meaningful, kristen
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:20:00 PM
You're quite a philosopher Kristen, this is so profound, enjoyed, Harry
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:31:00 PM
Nice...the invisible defects, the inside of a person can make even the most beautiful people ugly. Really like this one, ~Chris
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