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I know you have a thing for me. I feel the same way too. Before were falling drunk in love and together stuck like glue, I want to explain some parts of me until now you never knew. Even if you don't see them yet or do not care today, Please listen to what im saying and ask you listen anyway. I'm not a perfect girl. I might annoy or anger you Spend weeks feeling blue. My clothes thrown on the floor in a pile and hide my hurt by putting on a smile. I over think, point blame and sometimes... well quite often I complain. I sing a lot, I'm clumsy, I have the funniest and loudest laugh that will most likely drive you insane. I struggle to be on time , too early or too late I will forget about our plans, even though you've told me all the dates I get jealous very easily. This one in particular you will soon become to hate So... after all I've told you and If you still decide to stay... I promise to always love you, each and every single day.

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Date: 2/17/2025 2:27:00 AM
Great penning Julianne, nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too.Trust all is well, it's very cold up here in the North with signs of snow on the way. Take care and keep warm, Gordon
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Julianne Williams
Date: 2/18/2025 12:07:00 PM
Thank you. very cold here also! most certainly ready for some warmer weather. hope your well. all the best x
Date: 1/23/2025 9:10:00 PM
Very relatable on how you captured the emotion and imagery of relationships. Great poem!
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Julianne Williams
Date: 2/18/2025 12:07:00 PM
Thank you kindly xx

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