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Flatulence of the Brain

Thoughts are growing
going faster
twisting spinning
a disaster
jumping thumping
bumping banging
alarms are ringing
clinging clanging
mental meltdown
overloading
whirlwind
brainstorm
mind exploding!

Brain brain 
go away
Robin doesn't
want to play
you just have
too much to say
save it for
another day!

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/18/2008 1:22:00 PM

Love it! Sounds like an ADD me.

James Foulk

Date: 12/18/2008 11:42:00 AM

i feel the same way. a great write and very well said. thank you for reading let me choose and for your comment.

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/18/2008 3:00:00 AM

Great write, Robin. Light it maybe but with great depth too. I know this state exactly! Love, Nigel

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/17/2008 5:03:00 PM

I think they call this skeltonic verse... 2-3 word lines, helter-skelter expression, no punctuation. Very cleverly done! Love, Keith

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/17/2008 4:43:00 PM

Someone needs a time out. And if you ever discover how to shut your brain off, please let me know! Wow this was awesome! Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/17/2008 4:12:00 PM

I so know what this is. :) Yup, they never ever stop, but that's a good thing! I'll gladly submit to them. loved this! Kristin

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 12/17/2008 3:37:00 PM

wow this is great, I love it as well as all your poetry....Always Maryam

John Rhinem

Date: 12/17/2008 2:29:00 PM

Ps. Did I get all that write? Smile~

John Rhinem

Date: 12/17/2008 2:27:00 PM

Well, its either gas, or pompous pretense? Smile~But, its was not really a very pleasant thought either way! Although, I did find a somewhat underlying tint of humor to be found within it all~It seems as though your day is not going as brightly as one would hope? Yet, I truly hope it all ends well dear, "Lovely Robin!"~For your happiness, is extremely important unto many I believe!~"Blessings & Beauty To You Today & Always, With Love, John!"~Bye Dear:)