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Writing Challenge - F Word - Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Constance La France, Date written: 06/23/2023

afflicting him as far back as he can remember, a lingering, embarrassing condition he gets much grief for. it comes more often than usual; sometimes unbidden. it doesn't matter when or where - in bed, in church, in class, in the car, in the elevator; even at the dinner table where he occasionally escapes from. is it a feeling of indigestion? constipation? ha! i kid. a change of diet, perhaps? he swears he doesn't eat beans! when his flatulence explodes or rattles, people nearby scurry away.

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Date: 6/24/2023 8:52:00 PM
Now this is an original poem. Congratulations, Edward, for bucking the trend of everyday, commonplace poetry postings. I hope all is well with you. Brian
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/25/2023 4:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Brian:-)
Date: 6/24/2023 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/24/2023 3:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-) You as well, my friend.
Date: 6/23/2023 10:27:00 PM
Written in a very hilarious way in great detail about this one of the severe uncomfortable conditions. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/24/2023 3:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)

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