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Lies told to deceive your soul; let dying dreams drown in tears. And you fall into a hole; that deepens over the years. Squandering away your youth; you somehow lost track of time. And realizing the truth hastens anxiety's climb. Lured by flattery's sweet sway; you cling to dreams to survive. And secret your hurt away, hoping to keep love alive. Denial won't let you see past his lies the way you should. And fuels the fantasy; that he's just misunderstood. Seeking solace in the dark; hope hides flashes of real. And although tears leave their mark, smiles conceal how sad you feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/27/2018 12:04:00 PM
Particularly love the imagery in your first stanza. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 1/10/2016 8:45:00 AM
awesome poem
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/10/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Legendary, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/10/2016 8:27:00 AM
Two words , mesmerizing and divine, hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/10/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Dalia, I truly appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Date: 1/10/2016 2:02:00 AM
Reminds me of a write I've read about cyber romance. Wonderful rhythm and rhyme in this reflective piece, Emile. Best to you!
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Date: 1/10/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Kim, as always, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/9/2016 9:15:00 PM
Such a beautiful love poem! :)
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Date: 1/10/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/9/2016 3:55:00 PM
Emile, you have out done yourself! Bravo! your piece so light and magical, even the last to painfully true stanzas...just lovely, jill
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Date: 1/10/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Jill, your comments are always welcomed. Emile.
Date: 1/9/2016 2:11:00 PM
excellent write Emile, the words are fantastic
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:10:00 PM
Thanks White Sage, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/9/2016 11:31:00 AM
This is so romantic Emile
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Date: 1/9/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thanks Kelli, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/9/2016 11:15:00 AM
Yes...There is so much truth in this write, Emile. Promises...melting into thin air. How said. I can relate to this write, dear. Great poem.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/9/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Eileen, your comments are always welcomed. Emile.

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