Flashes Of Real

Lies told to deceive your soul let dying dreams drown in tears. And you fall into a hole; that deepens over the years. Squandering away your youth; you somehow lost track of time. And realizing the truth hastens anxiety's climb. Lured by flattery's sweet sway; you cling to dreams to survive. And secret your hurt away, hoping to keep love alive. Denial won't let you see past his lies the way you should. And fuels the fantasy; he is just misunderstood. Seeking solace in the dark, hope dims, flashes of real. And although tears leave their mark, a smile masks the pain you feel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Particularly love the imagery in your first stanza. Well done, Emile.
Legend Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:45 AM
awesome poem
Pinet Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Thanks Legendary, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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January 10, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Two words , mesmerizing and divine, hugs / / :) dalia
Pinet Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Dalia, I truly appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Nunez Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:02 AM
Reminds me of a write I've read about cyber romance. Wonderful rhythm and rhyme in this reflective piece, Emile. Best to you!
Pinet Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thanks Kim, as always, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Vaso Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Such a beautiful love poem! :)
Pinet Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Spagnola Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Emile, you have out done yourself! Bravo! your piece so light and magical, even the last to painfully true stanzas...just lovely, jill
Pinet Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Thanks so much Jill, your comments are always welcomed. Emile.
Sage Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 2:11 PM
excellent write Emile, the words are fantastic
Pinet Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Thanks White Sage, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
White Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 11:31 AM
This is so romantic Emile
Pinet Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Thanks Kelli, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Manassian Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Yes...There is so much truth in this write, Emile. Promises...melting into thin air. How said. I can relate to this write, dear. Great poem.
Pinet Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Thanks so much Eileen, your comments are always welcomed. Emile.
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