Flash Back

was sitting on a warm floor coated with green layer....
watching light covering d clouds dark haze...
my eyes r getting closed as was strucked by dream catcher...
a flash back has been started in my mind of u as a maze...

pictures of u has been wrapped in my thoughts ...
a glow of mine can be seen staring at u...
love ws d magic behind  glow and all aughts...
a crystal line has been formed around it following cue...

suddenly echo of your voice has been heard ...
cracking of that line.. beneath leaving my heart burning..
quick reverse journey started in my eyes which was vizard...
i was sitting in that floor alone watching my love crushing...

i stood there as was lifted up by my hope hands both sides...
i looked for a tree through which clouds cannot be seen...
i lay down there washing my eyes through tears....
but hope has been there by my side and my heart in between...

love pari
if u likd d poem or if didnt ...just put ur input wid cmnts....i wud love to observe  dt..

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Date: 12/31/2015 10:07:00 PM
Ps.........., enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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Date: 4/27/2014 4:27:00 AM
Parivartana... Congratulations. Thank you for the support. XOX~ Linda
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Date: 5/1/2014 12:45:00 PM
my pleasure..thnx :) :)
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