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Flapping In The Wind

Flapping in the wind bouncing to and fro hanging on by a thread knowing shortly I'll let go I remember when . . . that day you brought me home I was so fresh and new bright and bold bounded tight you'd cinch me up I'd keep you warm at night As time went on I no longer cleaned up well but still I was your favorite bringing to you warmness comfort when you need it and the scent of your loving home I know I will never be the one you fell in love with and many others will take my place I will never get the picture out of my head when you would put me on that glow upon your face

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Date: 10/13/2016 1:24:00 AM
Great write Tim:) I wonder what this is exactly about...Congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 10/10/2016 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome poem and top placement. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 10/9/2016 5:41:00 PM
Very beautiful write and endearing congratulations on your win, Tim :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/9/2016 2:30:00 AM
this is very touching poem Tim, so sad...here....well, congrats on the win:)//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/8/2016 6:35:00 PM
A very touching poem Tim - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/8/2016 4:24:00 PM
Hi Tim, Congratulations on your awesomeness. Enjoy my cute little blog "No Words" tata. LINDA
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:04:00 PM
This one kind of sad, Tim. I can really understand now that expression, Flapping in the wind. I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 11/11/2015 6:24:00 PM
Tim what an experience buddy you have lived life. Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 11/11/2015 9:51:00 AM
Sad...and packed with emotions. I still.have the sweatshirt I bought when I was in my early teens..and i never give it away.Same with friends
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Date: 11/10/2015 1:53:00 PM
How about a flower? Tim, I'm kidding, does a stray have wings? kind of sad, the image has to move on. No matter, an awesome poem. SKAT
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:16:00 PM
From the previous comments, I gather, this is not about a sweater? Lol! Excellent write, regardless of how one perceives!
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Date: 11/10/2015 7:17:00 AM
The future brighter than the past would be my friend for you deserve the best! A beautiful and touching poem, dear Tim!
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Date: 11/10/2015 1:59:00 AM
fluid flow with emotive lines that touches me Tim.. =`) always enjoyed your poems.. ~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 11/9/2015 7:10:00 PM
Tim this is marvelous --this is Excellent my friend--That's a 7 +++ please do check my out tell me what you think
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