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Flaming Son

From out of the west and the flaming Sun, an entrance he did make. There’s none like this one, an American Eagle, make no mistake! He’d served in all the Western wars… and cleaned up many a town. What he was doing here in ours… Totally, held the breath of all. It seemed the West had gone tame to him, all of a sudden, you know. He was heading East on an updraft of Freedom, and Justice, for all… To find just the right fight… where they needed him, to serve each night. He’d gaze upon the Liberty Bell, stand where Washington had done right. Still that would never be enough, when somewhere injustice struck. Here, he was just passing thru… His shadow leaving its amazing mark. None would ever forget, how he stood and flew so straight and tall. He’s the symbol and shield our men serve under, in this glorious land. When he flies over, stop and salute, our Flaming Son. He and all those, who into battle, do steadfastly follow him. For he is the leader of all those, who will forever steadfastly go. . Dedicated to my Son going into the Army on the Veterans Day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/23/2015 12:45:00 AM
How beautiful! I just love this touching dedication. : ) What a fabulous ending line too! I also love the line "He was heading East on an updraft of Freedom, and Justice, for all".You are quite an accomplished poetess! Beautiful work! Always, Laura
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:54:00 AM
We applaud your son, and all our military men and women who serve our country. We may not always applaud the war, but we honor our heroes.
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Date: 11/21/2014 12:42:00 PM
Nice write.. I will read more of yours
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Date: 11/19/2014 10:16:00 AM
A GREAT WRITE , A FINE DEDICATION.. May God bless and protect you dear son and give him my thanks for his service.. Another solid 7 from me and a very nice poem to read this fine day..
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Date: 11/18/2014 10:52:00 AM
I really like this one, it has a sort of feeling to it, conveys a message like a story. Like a ballad, in a way at least.
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Date: 11/15/2014 9:53:00 AM
"His shadow leaving its amazing mark" You should be sooo proud and I'm SURE you are, dear Carol! A valiant son to be sure! XXX
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Date: 11/11/2014 11:56:00 AM
May honor and glory serve him side by side and the Son to protect him in every battle. To the proud mom, thank-you for raising a warrior! All the best.
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