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Flaming Ripples---Etheree

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comes
wistful,
in a gloss
of  frothy drifts
she cruises near bends...
old river dressed in leaves
peach-gold like October tides.
And ripples splash through a varnished
light, crests twirling on pale twigs,wildbuds; 
flaming river’s last glide …. prelude to snow.



9/25/2015
For Love of October
Andrea Dietrich's Contest
Theme; River/lake in October

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Skat A

Date: 10/2/2015 10:24:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/1/2015 10:56:00 PM

Beautiful word painting, Nette. No need to look at the picture to visualize the imagery you present with your well-chosen words. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra

James Inman

Date: 10/1/2015 12:14:00 PM

Love this write Nette. "flaming river's" beautiful.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/1/2015 4:10:00 AM

Congrats on ur great win Nette with this awesome write!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/1/2015 3:01:00 AM

Nice win Nette congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 2:04:00 AM

ohhh, that line about peach-gold. SO pretty!! now that i am seeing it again, I like it even better than before. I think for the way you started with that verb at the top is why I scored it the way I did, but gosh, I should have placed this slightly higher!! Congrats in my contest, Nette.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/29/2015 7:14:00 PM

These wonderful lines flow so smoothly and made me feel so calm and relaxed as I read them... Very well written, Nette. Good luck in Andrea's contest!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/29/2015 3:30:00 PM

Beautiful pen Nette! Well done! :)Excellent in subject and style!A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light God bless you always!:) D

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/28/2015 5:04:00 PM

Dear Nette What beautiful images of nature and Autumn and it flows as smooth as a river stream, loved every line this is one of my favorites of yours my young friend, simply subperb, good luck in the contest but with this entry I don't think you will need it, cheri

Paul Callus

Date: 9/26/2015 4:45:00 PM

Hi Nette! Your river spreads out to my soul, in ripples of lovely imagery. A most delightful etheree, already visualized on the winners' list:) hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/25/2015 8:45:00 PM

I love the shape of a pine your poem makes...eluding to the holidays Nette. This is an excellent entry for Andrea's contest! 7

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/25/2015 5:39:00 PM

Dear Nette Loerive the line peach-gold like October tides, simply cool, also the ending is just sweet, good luck in the contest I so hope you win with this golden poem of yours, very inspirational, ch

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2015 12:22:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Great descriptive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 9/25/2015 11:15:00 AM

I'm completely mesmerized by your words and image my dear friend, Nette! Soo love it. You did it so well. I'm sure this will do well in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing and wish you the best. Thank you so much as well for reading mine, i mean my etheree. I just hope I did it right because it was my second or third time (i think) to try this form but my very first time to enter in a contest for an approval. Again, TYTYSSM. I'll send you msg soon. love & misses, leonora