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Flaming Farewell

The leaves are flaming,
and crackling in the cold wind,
Deep green is dying.
It's like gold sun's retreating,
or sunset of the season!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 2:36 PM
The picture matched well with you Tanka, my friend. Thank you for sharing your thoughts through you poetry, Evelyn. Hugs, Bill
Buehler Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 4:53 PM
You are most welcome, Bill. I'm so happy to know you liked the poem and picture. Thank you very much for your thoughts. Hugs.
Horsman Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 5:59 AM
Each season has it's own display of wonderful colours, as does so many of your poems, you have posted here, Evelyn, all of them superb.
Buehler Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 8:59 AM
Thank you so much for the joy your words bring, Harry. Hope your week is a good one. Evelyn :)
Buhagiar Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 1:35 AM
Let's welcome Autumn.
Buehler Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 9:00 AM
Such a beautiful time of the year. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 7:12 PM
This is really nice. i enjoyed your tanka
Buehler Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 7:24 PM
Many thanks for your appreciation. :)
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