Get Your Premium Membership

Flames

By the fire I sit tending While the day and night are blending Flames lick at my very soul On the pane the wind is moaning Such a sad song now intoning The day's living has brought its toll Flames dying, embers glowing Release at last , tears are flowing Heart tossed upon a lonely shoal 6/11/14 Barbara Gorelick Flames contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/11/2014 4:10:00 PM
emotional one... i see it like after a heartbreak...
Login to Reply
Date: 6/11/2014 3:08:00 PM
Sad but magnificent.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/11/2014 2:56:00 PM
Yes. I can see some poor soul staring into the fire. Good stuff, Barb. Love, Dave
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things