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Flames

I'm not alive, but indeed I grow even more yet as I'm fed. I have not lungs, but must have air and space for my outspread. No mouth have I wherefore to lie, but I'd consume lives with my power. If it's me that you would strive to subdue, give me a cold drink and a shower.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/30/2019 10:51:00 AM
This is REALLY good. Love it!
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Date: 10/27/2019 2:40:00 PM
Perfect personification.
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Date: 10/27/2019 8:20:00 AM
great personification....i could see that flame dancing there...striving to grow, don't feed it water and let it die out... hugs
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Date: 10/27/2019 4:40:00 AM
then you would douse the flames.... great personification..
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Date: 10/25/2019 11:12:00 PM
Juliet, A shower of flames to own in strict license of write. Enjoyed the flicker in your eyes. -Richard
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