Flames

I'm not alive, 
but indeed I grow
even more yet 
as I'm fed.

I have not lungs, 
but must have air
and space 
for my outspread.

No mouth have I 
wherefore to lie, 
but I'd consume lives
with my power.

If it's me that you
would strive to subdue,
give me a cold drink 
and a shower.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 10:51 AM
This is REALLY good. Love it!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Perfect personification.
Adams Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 8:20 AM
great personification....i could see that flame dancing there...striving to grow, don't feed it water and let it die out... hugs
One Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 4:40 AM
then you would douse the flames.... great personification..
Theraven Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 11:12 PM
Juliet, A shower of flames to own in strict license of write. Enjoyed the flicker in your eyes. -Richard
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