Flagger- PS

My partner called out cars she sent
as we stood at opposite ends
of the work zone, and when
hers had passed, I called out mine
sending them along a narrow passage.

We found a common language
to communicate, and we made
small talk when things were slow.

The construction crew struggled
to settle each fresh coat of asphalt
over a moist bed of clay
of a two-lane in northeast Nebraska
arcing and curving over hills and valleys
between two unincorporated areas.

Black angus cows grazed
on a grassy hill, coincidental beauty found
in another time and place,
and a bull bellowed
to declare the spread his own.

After work my partner and I stood
outside our rooms at the hotel.
She talked about her husband
and I talked about a librarian
who read my poems.

While we spoke about our
lives back home, a light in the lot
shone a distant star.

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Date: 10/7/2024 6:03:00 PM
I enjoy this poem. I like how it travels from mundane everyday life to the end where a star is a reminder of how small we are in the universe. This was a good story.
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Date: 2/24/2024 1:58:00 PM
I have read your winning work and found it very interesting. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 2/23/2024 6:49:00 AM
We found a common language to communicate, and we made small talk when things were slow...you show us what your day was like! Congratulations, Mike!
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Date: 2/8/2024 8:18:00 PM
Star-crossed communicators.
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Date: 2/8/2024 1:25:00 PM
That's pretty cool, Mike. Down to earth poem.
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