Fizzz

love is sweet, when it arrives, (Carol) when you look into those eyes, nothing better in our lives, yes it is grand, so sweet... complete.. oh dear how sweet and sad it is,...........~ A Rambling Poet ~ miss passed up by mr, tis, put a headlock on him babe, hogtie him make him slave, while coke still has the fizzzzz memories pin us by the ears, (Russell) love an hate, just split a gear, madness, genius, interfere, but I wont sit in judgement, here? too late... Don Johnson 30-aug-11

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Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/30/2011 1:23:00 AM

Awesome write mate flowing rhyming witty and yet wise...with love...old Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/30/2011 1:14:00 AM

love can be like a fizzzz..... wow! To your poem... enjoyed,..p.d.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/29/2011 10:39:00 PM

Very awesome write Don, I loved my verse especially! The whole poem is wonderful, I enjoyed reading it immensely!! Thanks for sharing the write!!

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 1:02:00 AM

Over here way on south, they put ya behind the green fence no doubt, poets will come to visit us old mate , when we are there behind the greenest gate! might b our fate..... :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2011 10:22:00 PM

cool little rhymes,especially the ones for the ladies!! love the fizzz line!

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 1:30:00 AM

We aren't meant judge another, very hard with poet brothers, i've joined a band of loonietics, the Soup is fun my type of hicks, a desperate delight:)

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 1:05:00 AM

Andrea, chile listen here, johnson's talking without beer, fizzzz time, girls rock, n r in charge, stow dem boys right in the barge, for later ....hey

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/29/2011 9:22:00 PM

somehow it's always that non-judgmental part that's the hardest to practice... the madness of ego's genius is an ear-pinner for sure!

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 1:33:00 AM

We aren't meant judge another, very hard with poet brothers, i've joined a band of loonietics, the Soup is fun my type of hicks, a desperate delight:)

John Smith

Date: 8/29/2011 9:13:00 PM

My ears got pinned back long ago with unhappy memories, so don't have good advice to give. I can offer plenty of it bad.

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 1:20:00 AM

Slips John, the Jumbo indescreet was 4 francine drattt

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 1:15:00 AM

Life is full but incomplete, without my lady, girl so sweet, spring on a Jumbo indescreet, and rescue me from dying:(

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 1:12:00 AM

Time to catch another horse, John S, been slapped down n got divorce, rise again and snavel new lady of course, the cure i am supplying, with women keep on trying, dump remorse:( are you buying?

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/29/2011 8:57:00 PM

interesting piece Don

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 1:18:00 AM

Francine, Life is full but incomplete, without my lady, girl so sweet, spring on a Jumbo indescreet, and rescue me from dying:(

Tony Lane

Date: 8/29/2011 8:33:00 PM

You are a hopeless romantic Don. Tony

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 1:22:00 AM

Sorry mate we waffle lots, an thoughts an words, are all i got, more fun than kites a flying....